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Grey clouds clot, choking a waning sun reclaiming shadows, the day had won. Birds fall silent in the somber air, as the coming storm evokes despair. Gaia showers where wet skies are bled, and mournful trees gather tears to shed. In a shroud of mist deprived of light, delicate flowers close petals tight. And the sky's bruised with darkening hues; swathes of purple and diminished blues. A ghostly chill commandeers each breeze, as the trees shiver with trembling leaves. While lightning flashes its jagged eye, thunder responds; with a mighty cry! (Couplet) 3/2/2017

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Date: 5/25/2018 9:33:00 PM
Beautiful, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/26/2018 8:33:00 AM
Thank you so much Line, your comments are much appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/5/2017 9:57:00 AM
You have pointed out the message so clear, poetic, original and with a fantastic imagery expression. Thank you for this lovely share friend. This is definitely a star content.
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Date: 3/5/2017 2:21:00 PM
Thanks Funom, I appreciate your encouraging comments, Emile.
Date: 3/3/2017 8:32:00 PM
Amazing poem! I Love it. Very well written :)
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Date: 3/4/2017 9:06:00 AM
Thanks Heidi, you have brought a smile to my day, Emile.
Date: 3/2/2017 8:27:00 PM
Here you haven't written a poem ,you have painted one, splendid!
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Date: 3/3/2017 8:08:00 AM
Thank you Arthur, I appreciate your encouraging comments, Emile.
Date: 3/2/2017 7:05:00 PM
How sweet it is! Emile...very high quality...anticipation, excitement...well written!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/3/2017 8:07:00 AM
Thanks James, I appreciate your encouraging comments, Emile.
Date: 3/2/2017 3:13:00 PM
- A heavy and nasty weather ... hope spring comes soon - Great written, Emile - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/2/2017 3:17:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise, I welcome your thoughts, Emile.
Date: 3/2/2017 2:36:00 PM
Your words paint a vivid scene!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/2/2017 3:18:00 PM
Thanks Maureen, I appreciate your encouraging comments, Emile.

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