Dime

A penny for your thoughts
Nine times you lied
I no longer give a dime
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Nance Avatar
August 24, 2015 at 7:55 AM
Ohh...this is brilliant!!! Love it really really !
Nance Avatar
October 4, 2015 at 7:14 AM
BOTH :)
Vaso Avatar
October 3, 2015 at 11:06 PM
The poem or me? LOL
Roper Avatar
August 23, 2015 at 8:43 PM
I have used that line a few times on my husband and it a ejetates him don't know why. Clever sir a7 Hugs Eve
Vaso Avatar
October 3, 2015 at 11:06 PM
Well , next time tell him "A beer for your thoughts" !!!! LOL
Allison Avatar
August 23, 2015 at 7:58 PM
Very clever Arthur - now can I give you a penny for your thoughts lol :-) hugs Jan xx
Vaso Avatar
October 3, 2015 at 11:05 PM
Well with inflation is 1 pound now!!!!!! If not I will never make it over to the Island of Men!!!!!!! :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 23, 2015 at 2:10 PM
This is brilliant Arthur. I loved it! 7
Vaso Avatar
October 3, 2015 at 11:03 PM
Thanks Connie!
Dietrich Avatar
August 23, 2015 at 10:55 AM
this is really super clever!! (I have a funny tale for you about Dime. It involves the pronunciation of it as DEE MAY by the Hispanics!) If you want to know this joke, ask me in a soupmail!!
Vaso Avatar
October 3, 2015 at 11:02 PM
dee may dee may para email ( I speak Spanish ) LOL
Smith Avatar
August 23, 2015 at 8:21 AM
Making us do math now?...your dime my dance floor
Vaso Avatar
October 3, 2015 at 11:01 PM
LOL :)
Manassian Avatar
August 23, 2015 at 3:02 AM
:) Oh WOW WOW WOW!!! I'm glad you wrote this one before my Kitty poem or people would misconstrue....They will anyway! Hugs, my dear. Very clever write.
Vaso Avatar
August 23, 2015 at 8:20 PM
Thanks Eileen, I will take a look!
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