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^{Format of the New form of Rhyme named MlNICHU is as follows: Total12 lines (4 stanzas of 3 lines each) Rhyme scheme: Aba, cBc, dbD, ABD. 4th stanza consists of repeat of 1st line of stanza 1, 2nd line of stanza 2, and 3rd line of stanza 3. Poem should stick to a chosen theme through all stanzas. A twist can be introduced in third stanza, if required by the theme, to make it more interesting. Syllable count : Stanza 1: 6,12,3 Stanza 2: 4,8,2 Stanza 3: 2,4,1 image of boy with rifle by bing.com}

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Dilemma Minichu kill thrill, rage unfolded? a youth's pebbles become hollow bullets inflight killer molded sunken, aloof might never makes right, but blight lone wolf hate ills endemic plight kills! kill thrill, rage unfolded? might never makes right but blight kills!

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 7/23/2024 5:58:00 PM

Anaya, your poetry is timely and on target. Assassination has changed the course of history at times, and we are lucky that the candidate was not harmed. Sad for everyone who was. The causes of this kind of thing are insidious....but could be dealt with if our leaders in Congress had the courage to deal with it.

I Am Anaya
Date: 7/26/2024 8:40:00 AM

I felt that too, Dilemma was the perfect prompt for the moment in time, or I should say history made. I really think it was divine intervention! TY

Robert Gorelick

Date: 7/18/2024 12:34:00 PM

Once again you have proven that minimal is more and are always up to the challenge. Keep on keeping it real like Patrick says below. My best, Robert

I Am Anaya
Date: 7/18/2024 2:19:00 PM

Thank you, sweet Robert!

Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 7/18/2024 4:37:00 AM

Wow I agree this is indeed a very angry write angry times weapons in the wrong hands angry youths in America prayers indeed God bless the federal bureau of investigation and god bless the United States of America .

I Am Anaya
Date: 7/18/2024 9:47:00 AM

I wasn't angry when I wrote it Yolanda, dilemmas are a choice, bulling is a choice. God bless America land of the free! xhugs

Tonye George

Date: 7/17/2024 12:46:00 AM

Anger has never paved a great way. This is one tricky form too. You've done it nicely Anaya.

I Am Anaya
Date: 7/17/2024 6:18:00 AM

Thank you, Tonye! I meant what I said.

Jay Narain

Date: 7/16/2024 10:08:00 AM

Nice poem. Violence breeds.

I Am Anaya
Date: 7/16/2024 12:35:00 PM

Thank you, Jay! It does indeed.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 7/16/2024 8:51:00 AM

Dear Anaya, Somehow, we have been on the same wavelength for some of our poems. First, I like the style and layout, which I believe enhance your message. I fully agree that violence is a destructive force, and it is bred from anger and hopelessness. It doesn't solve problems and only leads to further suffering. Well Said! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

I Am Anaya
Date: 7/16/2024 9:02:00 AM

Daniel, I'm delighted for your visit, Minichu's are quit constricted my thoughts are from my previous poem "Might Never Makes Right" mental illness and gun-out-of-control. The assailant was exposed to many guns in the home, which I think fueled and enabled his toxic intentions after mercilessly bullied. Thank you, hoping you'll get the full effects of the two poems. ;)

Tom Woody

Date: 7/15/2024 5:43:00 PM

Good ones Anaya

I Am Anaya
Date: 7/15/2024 5:45:00 PM

I had to change the first line, as it is a dilemma. Thank you :)