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Dijon Fantasy -Uc Contest Yellow Picture 4

The water, cloaked in the mist of a yellow dawn,
    Summoned souls to the shore of beguiling dreams.
    Sail true, My pilot, My hope,
    Into thy Dijon Fantasy.




    Written 3/3/2016 For U/C Contest  Yellow Picture 4

Copyright © Charlie Smith | Year Posted 2016

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 3/14/2016 11:25:00 PM Charlie Smith, Congratulations on your awesome win. Love LINDA Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 3/14/2016 11:33:00 PM Linda I hope you were able to see the painting. That I had to use for inspiration for the piece. It makes mor sense seeing it. Thanks for the compliment. CWS

Hansteven Selfa Date: 3/6/2016 12:01:00 AM Congratulations Charlie on your win in the UNITED COLOURS: Yellow Contest! You deserve it! :) -HANS Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 3/6/2016 6:24:00 AM Very kind of you to say Hans, I hope you enjoyed the piece...

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 3/5/2016 2:26:00 AM Charlie, your entry is eloquent and very deserving of your top placement! Congratulations! #7 Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 3/5/2016 6:13:00 AM You are most kind, thank you Connie

Sathya Babu Date: 3/5/2016 12:52:00 AM Many congratulations on your WIN Charlie.....:-) Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 3/5/2016 6:12:00 AM Thanks you very much Sathya

Jan Allison Date: 3/4/2016 5:17:00 PM very creative take on the theme many congrats on your win Charlie:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 3/4/2016 5:34:00 PM Hugs accepted, Thank you so much Jan

Laura Leiser Date: 3/4/2016 5:00:00 PM Congrats on your placement in the contest, Charlie :) Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 3/4/2016 5:29:00 PM Let's just keep doing this, you and I. Thanks, Dear

Beautiful Scars Date: 3/4/2016 4:12:00 PM Charlie, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 3/4/2016 4:21:00 PM Many thanks luloo

Charlotte Puddifoot Date: 3/4/2016 3:49:00 PM i like your use of the word 'dijon' in this verse - congrats on your win in the contest! Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 3/4/2016 4:16:00 PM You're very kind Charlotte, thank you..,

Sandra Haight Date: 3/4/2016 2:41:00 PM Wonderful imagery, Charlie. I enjoyed your poem and how you interpreted the prompt. Congratulations on your fine win. Sandra Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 3/4/2016 2:53:00 PM I loved the inspiration. Thanks for your kindness, Sandra, it's most appreciated.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores Date: 3/4/2016 1:42:00 PM Enjoyed very much this poem Charlie. My best wishes for the contest. Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 3/4/2016 1:47:00 PM Thanks for sharing your time and your wishes with me...

Constance La France Date: 3/4/2016 1:39:00 AM Charlie, this is beautifully penned and I am loving it 7 ~ Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 3/4/2016 6:15:00 AM Thank you Broken Wings, you're most generous...

Laura Leiser Date: 3/4/2016 12:14:00 AM This a very creative take on the visual that I truly enjoyEd, Charlie. Best of luck in the contest:) Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 3/4/2016 12:29:00 AM Thank you for your support. Thi is so very important to grow yout craft. A kind word goe's a long way...thanks Laura