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Digger

It was on my way home from school
From the trail on the hill
High, overlooking the school's baseball field
Where I could never hope to play..
           
I stood awhile to watch
my brother on the pitcher's mound...
                                                                                                                           With profound, tangible, and tom-girl attitude
I looked on, with green-eyed envy

It was then I caught my first glimpse of you
Huddled and alone in the drainage ditch
among the sodden seeth of leaves

I turned quickly....afraid you might take a bite
from the heel of my magic Keds
that could sweep my feet away like wings of a hawk...

Instead..like lightning...you were beside me...
Tail wagging, as if we were meant to be...side by side...
Two of us sprinting over the stretch of road
Feet scarcely touching the ground...lickety split....
Down the hill, around the bend...across the nettled field that took me home

Of course...it took a bit of convincing...
Begging, pleading, cajoling, 
Offers of impossible and implausable promises...
But YES! I was allowed to keep you!
You were MINE!!   I named you 'Ditch Digger'....
Never was I happier!!....
And even better...
was the simple fact...
that for the first time....
                          my brother looked on with green eyed-envy........


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A. Sharma Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 11:57 PM
Wonderful write on jealousy Carrie n a great win! Big congrats!
A  Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 11:21 PM
Carrie, congratulations on your win. Thank you for the support. Love SKAT
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 3:02 PM
Awesome story. I had 4 younger brothers, so if we would have had a sister, she probably would have either been a tom boy or spoiled. Vince
Brown Avatar
March 16, 2010 at 6:03 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest ~Somewhere A Pet Is Waiting Contest~ sponsored by ~A Rambling Poet~ Carrie. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
March 15, 2010 at 9:14 PM
Well, what a thing, I am finding all my favorites in this contest at the END of the winners list. hahaha. This was wonderful and a belated congrats to you. LUv, Andrea
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March 13, 2010 at 3:44 AM
Congratulations on your cheery win in The Rambling Poet’s “Somewhere A Pet Is Waiting.” I must say, it is a delightful read and a wonderful way to start the day. What a great name, "Ditch Digger" It makes me smile out loud because it reminds me of my 4 year old grandson who walked up to me with love in his eyes holding their big black cat (almost as big as him) and said, "Memaw, Look! This is "Nightmare" isn't he beautiful! The names...great fun! Lovingly, Dane Ann
Buckling Avatar
March 11, 2010 at 9:25 AM
Beautifully done Carrie. Such a wonderful story and a well deserved placement in the contest. Thank you so much for your kind comments, again.
Sweetheart Avatar
March 10, 2010 at 6:23 PM
A big congrats Carrie on your winning poem and placement in the Pet contest.. a wonderful and unique write ..a beautiful win for u to so enjoy as I have reading it..thankxxx for your many special comments and congrats also..luv..Linda-Marie
Johnson Avatar
March 10, 2010 at 5:46 PM
This is a wonderful story and masterfully told. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Fraser Avatar
March 7, 2010 at 9:50 AM
Wow Carrie, not only is it a beautiful poem, but the layout of it is delightful. If its not in the winners podium, i shall eat my hat, mmm i better get a hat. Good luck in the contest >> James
Devonshire Avatar
March 3, 2010 at 2:46 PM
Ditch Digger is lucky you found him. And how satisfying it must have been to see your brother green with envy! Great entry for the contest, Carrie. Wishing you success! Love, Carolyn
Foster Avatar
March 2, 2010 at 11:33 PM
Good work. I love the last verse, all the pleading and begging. I am so glad you won out. A most enjoyable story Carrie.....Love Margaret
Sweetheart Avatar
March 2, 2010 at 6:50 PM
A lovely story Carrie and a good luck in the contest if this is your entry... my entry is The Golden Penny about our sweet doggie .. luv.. enjoyed this loving tale "tail" ..Linda-Marie
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