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Different, From Yesterday

Day after day, endless, I walked away from your tomb, brokenhearted, melancholy, sorrowful and woebegone forlorn my life in bits, and pieces my steps faltering, halting and hesitating I wanted to die to be with you: under the cold white snow of winter, and the azure sun: I spent days, months, maybe a year desolate, like this but inside me a fire was burning brighter and stronger, then, one day I threw off my black cloak of grief I felt the sun, on my soul my steps now move to the notes of music I want to live to be happy: each day is a new day now for me, and life is wonderful: I still go visit your tomb, and it makes me weep but now, I leave the grief there and turn away. __________________________ March 16, 2017 Free Verse/Different, From Yesterday Copyright Protected, ID 884957 Written for the contest, New Day Sponsor, Nayda Ivette Negron First Place

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Date: 4/1/2017 8:20:00 PM
So uplifting and moving! Congrats on your win, Constance. Janice
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Date: 3/18/2017 8:56:00 AM
Lovely, BW.
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Date: 3/17/2017 11:24:00 PM
Great entry, best wishes Constance...
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Date: 3/16/2017 9:30:00 PM
heartfelt , but beautiful.... good luck ~*
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Date: 3/16/2017 7:07:00 PM
Beautiful write. You do know how to appreciate life, more than many, more than most, I am sure; good luck in the contest xomo
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Date: 3/16/2017 5:35:00 PM
Congratulations on such a meaningful, well written poem with an extremely important message in life! Good luck in the contest! This should do very well :)
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Date: 3/16/2017 5:25:00 PM
It is amazing how we can get over such grief and go on, but life is for the living, and I am too young to waste my life to weeping . . . but the pain never leaves, never, ever and can come over me unexpected and unbidden. But I try to live each new day as best I can.
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