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Die Augen Der Nacht, the Eyes of the Night, Los Ojos De La Noche

Vor den Augen der Nacht Verschwimmt die Einsamkeit So ganz tränenlos --------------------------------------- The loneliness blurrs In front of the eyes of the night Completely without tears --------------------------------------- Antes de los ojos de la noche Se desvanesce la soledad Así sin lágrimas

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Date: 2/2/2011 2:47:00 PM
Numb....we all face this at one time or another, but we hold on to hope for tomorrow comes soon. Love, Annalise
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Date: 2/2/2011 5:42:00 AM
Intense beauty in your Senryu Gert my friend... a vivid picture u relay to the reader ... thankxx for all your sweet and uplifting comments .. now back to reality and snow ..luv..haha..
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Date: 1/30/2011 9:53:00 AM
how sad that the night can also bring much loneliness-- I found this very moving, Gert-- I do hope that you are happy though :D keep smiling :) -- ingat and have a great week as well :D --nikko :)
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Date: 1/28/2011 4:12:00 PM
Sad one..Glad that I stopped by and read your work..Sara
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Date: 1/27/2011 8:26:00 PM
Gert, my cat that died three years ago was not afraid of strangers at all .She was like a small puppy so friendly and cute. I miss her alot. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/27/2011 8:36:00 AM
You always seem to paint pictures with words that touch readers' hearts, Gert. This is such a vivid description of depression. Well done, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/27/2011 6:13:00 AM
Wow, a great senryu Gert.. Hope your week has been a good one ;)
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Date: 1/27/2011 4:45:00 AM
These are beautiful Gert. Ich lebe in Irland und in Trier. Mein Ehemann ist in der Europäischen Kommission. Er arbeitet im Luxemburg Büro aber Reist durch Europa wöchentlich. Wir haben für 16 Jahre in Holland und 2 Jahre in Belgien gelebt. Ich reise zu Trier im April, wenn das Wetter wärmer ist. Mein Ehemann kommt nach Hause alle zwei Wochen aber Leben ist gut. E
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Date: 1/26/2011 6:37:00 AM
Yes, Gert, the quail haiku is a true story. I went outside after the storm to find a baby quail had gotten left behind by its mom. They march through our streets ike little ducks behind their moms. It struck me as really sad that his mom did not come back for him. But maybe they just knew instinctually that he would not last. I didn't know what to do for him he was so close to death and when I went back moments later, he had died. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/25/2011 10:15:00 PM
wow, so powerful this little one is! And thanks for your explanation of that one word. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 1/25/2011 7:01:00 PM
Nice analogy, Gert
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Date: 1/25/2011 5:52:00 PM
sad to be of the night....not inclined to the Light
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Date: 1/25/2011 5:32:00 PM
Nice to see you on the soup around this time Gert, almost night ,,es noche~ here.. sad feelings with no emotions.. feels very cold.. enjoyed your poem,..p.d.
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