Did She Smile

Floating in vacuum,
morphine intravenous supplied,
pain deadened,
she lies dormant, oblivious to all,
thoughts suppressed,
unfeeling and benumbed
in  the emergency cubicle.
 
Her husband holds her hand,
icy, like winter at its worst.
She moans, eyes flutter,
only to fall asleep again.
Anesthetized she finds rest.
Monitors bleep to rhythm,
steady as she goes just like
a sailing boat on rough seas.
 
She will survive.
Husband bewildered.
A human vegetable?
Oh no the expert says.
She will be fine.
The husband dials a number,
talks softly not to disturb.
There will be no divorce,
it's best that they give up
and do not meet again.
 
The woman on the bed groans.
Is that a smile on her lips?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Dietrich Avatar
July 23, 2022 at 6:41 PM
haha. I like this, Victor. She got her way!!!
Edmonds  Avatar
July 23, 2022 at 5:38 PM
I’d say it was a smile on her lips, it’s so sad when things go wrong in a marriage for whatever reason, may they live happily ever after. An inspirational read Victor. Hope all is well… Belle
Anaya Avatar
July 20, 2022 at 7:21 PM
I feel bad for all involved. "Eres Secreto De Amor" a song... comes to mind. With similar circumstances, and a twist is she is the other woman. Se La Vie
Raven Avatar
July 20, 2022 at 1:25 PM
Hi Victor, you have always known how to tell a story and make the reader live the lines, as in this most wonderful write. It has been both an honour and a pleasure to read this work. It is a pleasure to be back reading you, my friend. May you ever sing such songs ..... Mike.
Ricci Avatar
July 17, 2022 at 12:23 PM
Victor Victor Victor. Wow and wow again. Truly. It was an honor reading this. Please remain safe.
Kendrick Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 7:26 AM
What a story. I know a couple who had a story but far different. She was sick and, in the hospital, while his former lover came there to see him, and they had an affair while she lay dying, but she lived. They divorced. He married the other woman. Sad isn't it. The above story sad as well but maybe a happy ending. Well thought out and presented. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
M  Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 3:47 PM
Oh my Victor that’s quite a story….Hope she left him when she got better Ha! Great write…..Debx
Gorelick Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 9:51 AM
Moving and drillingly painful. Almost all of us have to go through something like this, quiet desperation.
George Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 2:58 AM
You have left us in gripping suspense....! Even at the end I am not sure how their relationship will end ! Great comparison of her limp body to a sailing boat on rough seas! A touching poem, dear Victor !
Seeker Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 2:34 AM
Straight out of James Hadley Chase ~ we used to read them in earlier years
Buehler Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 9:47 PM
A gripping, suspenseful story, Victor. It delighted me to discover, that not only would she live, but she"d get to keep her husband, too. Great writing! :) Evelyn
Tor Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 3:41 PM
You kept us at the edge of our seats Victor. Great theme and ending. Thank you for the emotional write in this one my friend. Hope you are feeling well and are doing well. God bless you and heal you of any ailments...
Andresen Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 10:05 AM
- A human vegetable? ... many "choose" life anyway ... but, what "life" ... it can be nice ... but, it can be painful ... hard to say - A thought-provoking poem, Victor - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 9:04 AM
What a sad verse, but a twist of I won. Well done my friend. I still remember how my husband felt when he was passing.. I felt like a life boat trying to throw a lifebuoy to prevent him from drowning.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 7:52 AM
Wow! You are so good at setting the mood and adding a twist…great one, Victor!
Pandit Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 7:07 AM
Love is fragile--Glad he came to his senses. She did smile, but grudgingly. Such is life!
Poet Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 6:57 AM
I really enjoyed the final couplet of your poem, and I thought the whole thing was an absolute masterpiece.
Skelly Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 2:57 AM
Bitter-sweet, the image you created in 2nd stanza was heartfelt, a serious write...Delice
Bangalee Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 2:50 AM
A groaning smile is a living corpse in the field of life.
Cunningham Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 1:46 AM
A happy ending Victor, but it could have easily gone the other way. Tom
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