Dictum Dichotomy

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Amulet graced by gems clad for stratum prow tawny glyphs margin of witticism & quagmire extravagant dictum trivialize shores trails summer ousted & waves of wrangles sundered the ocean & swapped my spirit in crimson burst swirl to scatter In demolishing ruins & twilight crumble slump of man glittering Phoenix fire trail scribble a cyan-xantos rhyme. bore a shallow rostrum defective soothsayer haunts dreams? hilltops & both oceans & skies cyclone of emotions & lethargic sadness soul storm mulling. 5TH Place Contest winner Written: July 19, 2022 A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE CHOICE Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/24/2022 9:33:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this impressive use of lexicon Lasaad. Blessings xxoo

Sotto Poet
Date: 7/24/2022 12:17:00 PM

So good to see you visiting and commenting, dearest friend, Connie. Thank you for your courteous comment! Be blessed!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/22/2022 8:55:00 PM

"defective soothsayer haunts dreams?" - Thought-provoking. Congratulations!

Valsa George

Date: 7/22/2022 8:13:00 PM

You have created a 'cyclone of emotions' in lofty diction to boot, not easy to be comprehended by average brains! Congratulations on your great win dear friend !

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 7/22/2022 4:58:00 PM

So wise and wonderful! It is interesting and forces you to think - So glad you were a winner. Congrats and God bless you - ALSO, thank you for your kind words! They are powerful. Love, Gina

Hilo Poet

Date: 7/22/2022 12:54:00 PM

An admirable style you've mastered here, Lasaad, intriguing "lethargic sadness" contrasting message constants! Cheers on your fine win my friend, Aloha~William