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Dictate From One With Out Power To Similar Ones Who Have Money and Get Confused

Don't touch me! For if you do you might feel. Don't listen to me! For if you do you might hear. Don't look at me in the eyes for if you do you might have the compulsion to question what feels and sounds good. ~~~~~~~~~~~~ radical stuff, yeah?

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Don Johnson

Date: 11/29/2011 6:10:00 PM

deep thoughts abound up in the head, better let em out instead, good on ya Nance, God strike me dead, such thoughts should get their freedom, red....

Joe Maverick

Date: 11/27/2011 7:43:00 AM

Well Nancy..this is great:) a lot of meaning here this was well done, and i for one am looking & listening..! all my best Joe..!

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

Date: 11/26/2011 4:52:00 PM

Radical...absolutely! Nice Nancy!

Tony Lane

Date: 11/26/2011 4:11:00 PM

It is very hard for people to talk to each other. Our thoughts are segmented and packaged. No thoughts outside our own need apply.

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/26/2011 3:36:00 PM

The title is probably the longest I've seen lol. Bravo for coloring outside the lines. An interesting piece of poetry. As always I have enjoyed your work. Luv michael.