Constance La France Poet Crystalline

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Diaphanous Lover

 

He comes in dreams as an eclipse,
to kiss my flushed cheeks and ruby lips.


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February 26, 2023


Poetry/Crystalline/Diaphanous Lover
Copyright Protected, ID 02-1528-117-26
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written for the Standard contest, A New Crystalline
sponsor, Tania Kitchin, Judged 03/12/2023 

First Place

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Andrea Dietrich March 24, 2023 at 1:49 PM What a beauty. Congrats Constance La France March 24, 2023 at 6:21 PM Andrea, thank you so much for the compliment and congrats, blessings, Constance

Sara Kendrick March 13, 2023 at 12:56 PM Congratulations on this top winner. Way to go. Sara Constance La France March 14, 2023 at 8:15 AM Sara, thank you so much for the congratulations and compliment, blessings, Constance

Sam Kauffman March 13, 2023 at 12:41 PM So dreamy and romantic with a touch of mystery Constance. Congratulations on your win! Wonderful title! Perfect! Blessings and a hug! Constance La France March 14, 2023 at 8:15 AM Sam, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and congratulations, blessings and hugs, Constance

Anne-Lise Andresen March 13, 2023 at 4:49 AM - Beautiful, Constance :) - Congratulations on your top win :) - hugs Constance La France March 13, 2023 at 8:28 AM Sunshine, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings and hugs, Constance

Joanna Daniel March 12, 2023 at 7:08 PM This is brilliant, Constance, enjoyed once again, congratulations:) Constance La France March 13, 2023 at 8:29 AM Jo, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and congratulations, blessings, Constance

John Lawless March 12, 2023 at 5:56 PM this may have place atop a "standard" contest but it is far from standard. Beautifully done in a very taut provoking poem.... Constance La France March 13, 2023 at 8:29 AM John, thank you so much for the lovely comment and the compliment, blessings, Constance

Linda Alice Fowler March 12, 2023 at 3:39 PM Sweet win Constance. Congratulations! :) Constance La France March 13, 2023 at 8:30 AM Linda, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings, Constance

Kim Rodrigues March 12, 2023 at 2:25 PM Congratulations! Lovely write! Constance La France March 13, 2023 at 8:30 AM Kim, thank you so much for the congratulations and compliment, blessings, Constance

Ann Peck March 12, 2023 at 11:45 AM So lovely, Constance. Congratulations on First Place! Constance La France March 13, 2023 at 8:31 AM Ann, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations blessings, Constance

Tania Kitchin March 12, 2023 at 10:29 AM Constance, congratulations on your first place win with your sweet and romantic crystalline! Constance La France March 13, 2023 at 8:32 AM Tania, thank you for the contest and my great placement and for the compliment and congratulations, blessings, Constance

Fin Chuuk February 28, 2023 at 7:05 AM Ahhh… a sweet dream to be remembered for a long time. :) Beautiful, Constance :) Constance La France February 28, 2023 at 7:45 AM Fin, thank you so much for the comment and compliment, blessings, Constance

Anne-Lise Andresen February 28, 2023 at 4:40 AM - Seewt dreams, Constance :) - Lovely :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs Constance La France February 28, 2023 at 6:31 AM Sunshine, thank you so much for the compliment and encouragement, blessings, Constance

Joanna Daniel February 26, 2023 at 9:47 PM Lovely, simply lovely, Constance:) Constance La France February 27, 2023 at 6:28 AM Jo, thank you so much for the lovely compliment, blessings, Constance