'dianna'

The pain is gone as God now holds her close..
Way to young to go but cancer was her foe..
An angel now in Heaven watching us through
a glassy mirror in peace..
Forever under her sweet sight , her touch and 
warmth is now for God to please..
My sister Dianna who's beauty shined to all who
she came across...
Now lays in heaven surrounded by flowers watching
down on those who still feel her loss...
No more Doctors , no more pain..
When the time has come we all be the same..




"Reflection" contest by "Rambling Poet"
written by Michael J. Falotico
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 3/3/2011 2:02:00 PM
Don't know how I missed this, Michael. But when one's away from soup for a day, many poems scroll by pretty fast. Congratulations on your fine win with this poignant piece.. And yes, she's free from pain and all this strife..and peace be unto you as you will be seeing her again some day. Love and peace, Annalise
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Date: 3/3/2011 1:58:00 PM
Michael, don't know how I missed this, but then again, poems roll by so fast sometimes...you miss a day off Soup and you miss a lot! Anyway, congratulations are in order for this poignant write. Peace to you as you will see her again one day. And yes, she is free as when God first made her! Love, Annalise
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Date: 3/2/2011 11:54:00 AM
Congratulations Michael on your fine win in Constance's wonderful contest....:)
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Date: 3/1/2011 1:28:00 PM
I remember this tender one, Michael . very nicely done and congrats on your win. Hope you are having a nice week. andrea
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Date: 2/28/2011 8:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Michael in Constance's contest "Reflection". Love, Carol
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Date: 2/27/2011 1:43:00 PM
Michael, congratulations on this awesome win with this beauty in memory of your sister, love Wilma
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Date: 2/26/2011 5:02:00 PM
Congratulations Michael on your big win and your lovely poem dedicated to your sister. I know she is proud. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/26/2011 4:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/26/2011 11:01:00 AM
Congrats Michael on your wonderful win in the Reflections contest my White Knight.. so happy to be sharing the winners list with one of the best and a great friend.. your Jersey Girl forever and always with luv..
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Date: 2/26/2011 7:45:00 AM
Michael, good to see you at the top again. Congratulations on your worthy poem's fourth place honor in Constance's inspiring contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/26/2011 6:11:00 AM
I hope she can see this poem and how well you id with it..just wonderful. BG
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Date: 2/25/2011 10:50:00 PM
great to see your win here Michael,and may God bless your future efforts.
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Date: 2/25/2011 8:01:00 PM
So touching and very unique. Many congratulations for this big win.
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Date: 2/25/2011 6:38:00 PM
Very touching write Michael!Congrats on your win.Thanks for your ever warming words at my pages----kashinath
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Date: 2/25/2011 6:26:00 PM
great to see you bagging the awards, michael.. CHEERS! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/25/2011 5:55:00 PM
Michael, congratulations on winning in Constance's contest with this fine entry.
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Date: 2/25/2011 5:48:00 PM
This touching poem grabbed me the first time I read it. Congratulations, Michael!
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Date: 2/25/2011 5:46:00 PM
Congratulations on the fourth place win in the contest of Constance, Michael
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Date: 2/19/2011 5:36:00 PM
A beautiful write; I cry for the ones who lose the fight but am greatful I am still here. My heart goes out to you for your loss. I especially liked the line, "When the time has come we all be the same". I enjoyed the read. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 2/18/2011 4:36:00 PM
Sorry about your loss..It is very painful to lose someone that close to us..I hope that you have felt healing in writing your words of love for her..."Rose Sunset On Flint"...There was a sunset and moon rising at the same time one on my right and one on my left..The scene was the Flint River.Thanks for stopping by and reading my work...Sara
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Date: 2/18/2011 4:08:00 PM
This is Dedicated to my Sister Dianna who left us way to early at the age of 46.. Too soon...Love you Di...
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Date: 2/18/2011 3:52:00 PM
Oh this touches the heart, and makes a softer place to find our peace with such loss. Lovely inspirational poem!
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Date: 2/18/2011 2:17:00 PM
A real treasure your sister must have been.Thanks for your sweet and funny comment Micheal.~LUV~Teresa
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Date: 2/18/2011 1:53:00 PM
This is a real deep to the core write, Michael, I can feel your joy mixed with sadness, knowing that she has no more pain and the knowledge that she is watching you and probably smiling as well.. love Wilma
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Date: 2/18/2011 11:29:00 AM
this one is going to really touch Constance's soul. marvelous way to develop the theme for that amazing picture. Great job!!(she must have been such a sweet sister)
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