Michael J. Falotico Poet Rhyme

'dianna'

The pain is gone as God now holds her close..
Way to young to go but cancer was her foe..
An angel now in Heaven watching us through
a glassy mirror in peace..
Forever under her sweet sight , her touch and 
warmth is now for God to please..
My sister Dianna who's beauty shined to all who
she came across...
Now lays in heaven surrounded by flowers watching
down on those who still feel her loss...
No more Doctors , no more pain..
When the time has come we all be the same..




"Reflection" contest by "Rambling Poet"
written by Michael J. Falotico

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Audrey Haick March 3, 2011 at 2:02 PM Don't know how I missed this, Michael. But when one's away from soup for a day, many poems scroll by pretty fast. Congratulations on your fine win with this poignant piece.. And yes, she's free from pain and all this strife..and peace be unto you as you will be seeing her again some day. Love and peace, Annalise

Audrey Haick March 3, 2011 at 1:58 PM Michael, don't know how I missed this, but then again, poems roll by so fast sometimes...you miss a day off Soup and you miss a lot! Anyway, congratulations are in order for this poignant write. Peace to you as you will see her again one day. And yes, she is free as when God first made her! Love, Annalise

James Fraser March 2, 2011 at 11:54 AM Congratulations Michael on your fine win in Constance's wonderful contest....:)

Andrea Dietrich March 1, 2011 at 1:28 PM I remember this tender one, Michael . very nicely done and congrats on your win. Hope you are having a nice week. andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown February 28, 2011 at 8:02 AM Congratulations on your win Michael in Constance's contest "Reflection". Love, Carol

Wilma Neels February 27, 2011 at 1:43 PM Michael, congratulations on this awesome win with this beauty in memory of your sister, love Wilma

Joyce Johnson February 26, 2011 at 5:02 PM Congratulations Michael on your big win and your lovely poem dedicated to your sister. I know she is proud. Love, Joyce

Sara Kendrick February 26, 2011 at 4:39 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 26, 2011 at 11:01 AM Congrats Michael on your wonderful win in the Reflections contest my White Knight.. so happy to be sharing the winners list with one of the best and a great friend.. your Jersey Girl forever and always with luv..

John Freeman February 26, 2011 at 7:45 AM Michael, good to see you at the top again. Congratulations on your worthy poem's fourth place honor in Constance's inspiring contest. Agape, Moses

Barbara Gorelick February 26, 2011 at 6:11 AM I hope she can see this poem and how well you id with it..just wonderful. BG

Joe Maverick February 25, 2011 at 10:50 PM great to see your win here Michael,and may God bless your future efforts.

Tahera Mannan February 25, 2011 at 8:01 PM So touching and very unique. Many congratulations for this big win.

Kash Poet February 25, 2011 at 6:38 PM Very touching write Michael!Congrats on your win.Thanks for your ever warming words at my pages----kashinath

Nette Onclaud February 25, 2011 at 6:26 PM great to see you bagging the awards, michael.. CHEERS! :) huggs, nette

Robert Pettit February 25, 2011 at 5:55 PM Michael, congratulations on winning in Constance's contest with this fine entry.

Carrie Richards February 25, 2011 at 5:48 PM This touching poem grabbed me the first time I read it. Congratulations, Michael!

Dr.Ram Mehta February 25, 2011 at 5:46 PM Congratulations on the fourth place win in the contest of Constance, Michael

Caryl Muzzey February 19, 2011 at 5:36 PM A beautiful write; I cry for the ones who lose the fight but am greatful I am still here. My heart goes out to you for your loss. I especially liked the line, "When the time has come we all be the same". I enjoyed the read. Good luck in the contest.

Sara Kendrick February 18, 2011 at 4:36 PM Sorry about your loss..It is very painful to lose someone that close to us..I hope that you have felt healing in writing your words of love for her..."Rose Sunset On Flint"...There was a sunset and moon rising at the same time one on my right and one on my left..The scene was the Flint River.Thanks for stopping by and reading my work...Sara

Michael J. Falotico February 18, 2011 at 4:08 PM This is Dedicated to my Sister Dianna who left us way to early at the age of 46.. Too soon...Love you Di...

Carrie Richards February 18, 2011 at 3:52 PM Oh this touches the heart, and makes a softer place to find our peace with such loss. Lovely inspirational poem!

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet February 18, 2011 at 2:17 PM A real treasure your sister must have been.Thanks for your sweet and funny comment Micheal.~LUV~Teresa

Wilma Neels February 18, 2011 at 1:53 PM This is a real deep to the core write, Michael, I can feel your joy mixed with sadness, knowing that she has no more pain and the knowledge that she is watching you and probably smiling as well.. love Wilma

Andrea Dietrich February 18, 2011 at 11:29 AM this one is going to really touch Constance's soul. marvelous way to develop the theme for that amazing picture. Great job!!(she must have been such a sweet sister)

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