Diane

She listened to me; sometimes I had to talk all night.
She was my ears when I read late with a forbidden light
And my father’s snores were the signal that all was well,
That we needn’t fear the sudden steps that were his frightening tell.
She watched for me when I ran in the night to break free of the strain;
She waited for me to return back home; she would open the window pane.
She watched and waited and listened and prayed and hoped and gave.
She was my ears, my eyes, my help, my friend, she was so brave.
In later years she became my memory for all of those I lost.
In later years she drifted away and I have always rued the cost.
She was my sister, my person, my touchstone, my courage, my hope.
Her name is Diane.
I pray we meet again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 1/27/2011 9:13:00 AM
Congratulations Deb, on the win in Crystal's contest "My Hero". Love, Carol
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Date: 1/18/2011 2:48:00 PM
I hope you and yours sister find a way back to each other. It's obvious she had a great influence on you. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/18/2011 1:53:00 PM
Heartfelt and touching Deb. I can feel your emotion in this poem. Many many congratulations on your win in the contest....:)
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Date: 1/18/2011 11:55:00 AM
Congrats Deb on your super big win in the My Hero contest with this astounding write and entry my friend.. enjoy your second place with pride for an excellent entry my friend..with luv..
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Date: 1/8/2011 3:32:00 PM
This is powerful enough to remind me of the hit song of yesteryear "Diane" by the Bachelors.
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Date: 1/6/2011 6:43:00 AM
Thanks for your visit kind lady. Was drawn to this as my wife's name is Diane, goddess of wildlife and the moon. A loving tribute to someone special. Hold her in your heart until you meet again. Eamon
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Date: 1/5/2011 8:40:00 AM
I pray also that one day, you and Diane are united, there is much "love" in this poem, a very meaningful and lovely poem it is~~
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Date: 1/5/2011 4:08:00 AM
You have a flair for writing and creating an apt situation to draw a character. I can visualise everything how your sister Diane was everything to you. Deb. enjoyed the write
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