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Diamonds On Green Velvet

the water drips little diamonds on a green velvet morning lawn

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Kim Merryman

Date: 2/25/2012 10:17:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Robert! Love, Kim

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 2/24/2012 11:29:00 AM

Fine write,wonderful imagery.Congratulations on your win,Robert....

Kash Poet

Date: 2/24/2012 6:17:00 AM

Beautiful imagery here Robert.Congrats on your win.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/24/2012 5:35:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Charles' Haiku contest Robert. Love, Carol

Gwendolen Song

Date: 2/24/2012 5:22:00 AM

Morning dew does resemble diamonds to me too...Great idea...golfers think grass is like velvet ...are u a golfer, Robert?...Congrats on this winning haiku. Gwendolen

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/23/2012 11:28:00 PM

very lively flow of a 'ku, robert.happy congrats on your well--deserved win :) huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/23/2012 8:55:00 PM

This is really pretty, Robert. Congratulations on your win.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/23/2012 5:55:00 PM

lovely imagery congrad's Light & Love

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

Date: 2/18/2012 2:55:00 PM

Robert-This is lovely and I LOVE your title!

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/17/2012 3:44:00 PM

What a fantastic little Haiku Robert! I love the, "...velvet morning law" this is a great line for the poem! Fabulous Work!!

Robert Pettit
Date: 2/17/2012 6:30:00 PM

I noticed a rare typo for me. Actually, I meant to type "velvet morning lawn".

Chrysanthemum Flower

Date: 2/17/2012 3:36:00 PM

Very pretty haiku

Jack Horne

Date: 2/17/2012 3:07:00 PM

lovely haiku, Robert