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Mythical gods believed diamonds come from their tears. gems are forever they are the tears of old gods -- cry me a river

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 1/22/2021 8:44:00 AM
Yes! Cry me a river too :) Great Haiku, Victor
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Date: 1/18/2021 12:11:00 PM
WoW! Victor, You have penned a fantastic haiku. Well done:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/18/2021 12:09:00 PM
wow, an outstanding KU, my friend. So sorry I have so little time here recently!
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Date: 1/18/2021 6:51:00 AM
Ahh I see what you meant about the final line of a haiku; apparently I need to find more thorough information on haiku. There was one here who was very knowledgeable on the original haiku form; but I do not believe he comes around anymore. Thank you Victor :)
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Date: 1/17/2021 6:10:00 PM
Very nice poem, Victor. I like the line "I am a breeze."
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Date: 1/17/2021 8:51:00 AM
Cry me a river, had to look this up, written by Arthur Hamilton, so all the mega rich people who have so many diamonds must have cried buckets of tears. Great write my friend. Hugs an Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 1/17/2021 6:13:00 AM
- A valuable haiku ... well done, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/17/2021 12:37:00 AM
'Cry me a river' from the master Haiku poet is a marvelous 'aha' point, the distinguishing sign of a haiku. Great.
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Date: 1/16/2021 9:48:00 PM
This is precious! And it is also a Fave. :=)
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Date: 1/16/2021 9:21:00 PM
So clever Victor...Stay Safe. Harry
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Date: 1/16/2021 5:38:00 PM
Great haiku
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Date: 1/16/2021 12:51:00 PM
Are there any of those old gods left? Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 1/16/2021 8:52:00 AM
Yes, cry me a river. Good Haiku, Victor. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/16/2021 6:06:00 AM
Nicely done Victor and with a subtle metaphor entwined
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Date: 1/16/2021 5:48:00 AM
And I'll cry a river over you Victor my friend. :)) This is a very nice haiku indeed. Linda
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Date: 1/16/2021 5:45:00 AM
Gleaming like gems, Victor. Loved that last line: cry me a river.
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Date: 1/16/2021 4:28:00 AM
This is a good one. A fave for me. God Bless, JB
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Date: 1/16/2021 3:31:00 AM
That is something I didn't know.. Nice Haiku Victor. Am reading all your poems together. Didn't get much time to log into Soup. Have a blessed day ~ Ani
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Date: 1/16/2021 2:44:00 AM
Wonderful write, Victor. I didn't know this. God bless you
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Date: 1/16/2021 1:54:00 AM
Then it's no wonder diamonds are considered to be so precious. A fine write, Victor.
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Date: 1/16/2021 1:27:00 AM
wonderful words Victor:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/16/2021 1:08:00 AM
A sparkling haiku Victor, if diamonds came from tears how rich we all would be. Tom
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