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Dewdrops

As the early morning sun rises in private I am yours I can see your purple iris cast a marrow of essenced bliss my way, and as my senses roar you stir me to the core She's a dainty eyelet adage my Queen of irisis Centered in my antique carriage a pearl of wisdom for marriage she is, flowing like the Tigris I flourish with each kiss Each dewdrop in the sun sparkles telling me I am loved brighter than fine golden bangles this jewel of vibrant jangles was scented from heaven above I never, feel unloved. June 16, 2022 Sponsor Angel L Villanueva Contest Name Dewdrops

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Date: 6/17/2022 11:03:00 PM
Beautiful poem Vie, so lovely I can imagine many of these dewdrops, forming a rainbow, when you write of golden bangles, and vibrant jangles.
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Date: 6/20/2022 5:12:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by dear friend, your comment is much appreciated
Date: 6/17/2022 6:55:00 AM
Lovely write. I enjoyed and wish you a win in the contest. God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina
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Date: 6/17/2022 3:02:00 PM
Thank you dear friend for the kind visit, much appreciated
Date: 6/17/2022 5:46:00 AM
Really beautiful poem, Vienna. An awesome blend of nature and human emotions in realm of dewdrops. Should be a TOP winner.
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Date: 6/17/2022 3:02:00 PM
Thanks for your kind visit Vijay,
Date: 6/17/2022 1:39:00 AM
Beautiful! Good luck for the contest, Mystic Rose
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Date: 6/17/2022 3:01:00 PM
Thank you dear Unseeking One, nice to see a comment from you
Date: 6/16/2022 9:08:00 PM
Wow, so beautiful.... ! Each dew drop glistens with beauty and radiance in your poem, Rose....
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Date: 6/17/2022 3:01:00 PM
Thanks for your visit dear Valsa,
Date: 6/16/2022 8:01:00 PM
Very nice! That is actually kind of an interesting combo of rhyme and meter
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Date: 6/17/2022 3:00:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by Jeff, hope she likes it,

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