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Dew Drops

Dew on grass
Like gems shine
Joy on view

Golden beams,
Weave patterns.
Drops glisten.

They wobble.
Sun is up.
Time to go.


Jan. 28.2023

~ Placed First~

Tricube Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Sara Kendrick 

Copyright © Valsa George | Year Posted 2023

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Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/31/2023 6:30:00 AM - Congratulations on your winning poem, Valsa - hugs Login to Reply

Gershon Wolf Date: 1/30/2023 8:29:00 PM I don't a tricube from a bowl of borscht, but this one strikes me as very good!! Login to Reply

Terry Miller Date: 1/30/2023 2:01:00 AM I love this so much. Congratulations! Login to Reply

Mahtab Bangalee Date: 1/29/2023 9:30:00 PM just beautiful to read; congrats Login to Reply

Christuraj Alex Date: 1/29/2023 9:10:00 PM Great scene. Serene. Beautiful. Congratulations! Login to Reply

Joanna Daniel Date: 1/29/2023 6:58:00 PM Well written, Valsa, congratulations:) Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 1/29/2023 7:58:00 AM Thank you for participating in my contest. I enjoyed reading this one. There were so many good ones that it was hard to decide. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara Login to Reply

Sotto Poet Date: 1/28/2023 12:48:00 PM How suggestive it is of the light of a bright morning reflecting in the dew! I hope you good luck with the contest. Login to Reply

Michelle Faulkner Date: 1/28/2023 12:12:00 PM So evocative of a lovely sunrise reflected in the early morning dew! Best wishes for the contest~ Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 1/28/2023 10:01:00 AM Dear Valsa, great imagery and perfect ending. Login to Reply

Tom Cunningham Date: 1/28/2023 7:37:00 AM Love that time of day the best as everything starts coming alive again. Getting up at 0300 when I was at work I saw many sunrises. Good luck in the contest Valsa. Tom Login to Reply