Dew Drop Glisten

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dim blue-gray backdrop dark etched shapes move or stand still tree branches extend bend out like roots in the sky star-like fireflies flit across 6/1/2021

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/2/2021 3:18:00 PM

Those fireflies light up the night don't they. Very descriptive Tanka. Enjoyed reading this one. Thanks for your visit. Sara

Judy Ball

Date: 6/1/2021 7:18:00 PM

A summer evening in the garden. Lovely. God Bless, JB

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/1/2021 5:21:00 PM

Wonderful imagery, Eve!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/1/2021 10:17:00 AM

You have a keen eye, and the only thing keener then your eye dear Eve, is your precious heart. Stay beautiful dear, as I remember you xo

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/1/2021 10:12:00 AM

There is great imagery in this tanka. Well done. Hugs.

Paul Callus

Date: 6/1/2021 9:33:00 AM

Five lines of beautiful imagery, Eve. I can tell you are also a painter! Regards & Hugs // paul

L Milton Hankins

Date: 6/1/2021 9:11:00 AM

A beautiful tanka based on a close observation of nature, which makes it simply lovely. Good work, Eve.