Premiere Contest WinnerDevoted to Love

Written: March 08, 2024 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ We would be devoted ever I swore I would never bequeath you, you're my love. forged never walk near me dear. despite, where our lifetime may shove sincere gold cord souls bound as dove Lord we would be devoted ever despite, where our lifetime may shove Lord
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Anaya Avatar
April 10, 2024 at 4:12 PM
Congratulations Sotto Poet, a devoted love so true. Romantic and ever passions break out the bubbly for the trophy win! ~Anaya
Fowler Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 10:06 AM
You string your words together wonderfully Las. Congratulations! :)
Mcintosh Avatar
April 6, 2024 at 10:28 PM
much congrats. God bless and keep you
Edmonds  Avatar
March 9, 2024 at 4:31 PM
A sentimental poem of devotion for your love, a delight to have read… Blessings, Beryl
One Avatar
March 9, 2024 at 11:26 AM
A lovely poem, Sotto.. nice arrangement of words..
Pandit Avatar
March 9, 2024 at 7:32 AM
So wonderfully expressive of love, my friend. Words exude from lifetime of passion for the beloved. Splendidly done, Lasaad.
Jones Avatar
March 8, 2024 at 5:07 PM
What a passionate poem of devotion and emotional love! Great job!
Beaufort Avatar
March 8, 2024 at 12:15 PM
SP, This really describes love and how some of us feel about our partners. As you say, we are together regardless of what life throws at us. Beautiful and real it is.
Empress Avatar
March 8, 2024 at 12:15 PM
Beautiful and you do this form so well always dr sotto, the simplicity of your words and how they flow with such emotive and touching lines that depict devotion is beyond impeccable and worthy of all the accolades, i love especially the opening lines and also how youve written “ walk near me dear. despite, where our lifetime may shove“ how beautiful is that! “ I swore I would never bequeath you, you're my love.“ a line that is truly soulful! And sounds sincere too! Pleasure reading this, BOL
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