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Devoted to Love

Written: March 08, 2024 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ We would be devoted ever I swore I would never bequeath you, you're my love. forged never walk near me dear. despite, where our lifetime may shove sincere gold cord souls bound as dove Lord we would be devoted ever despite, where our lifetime may shove Lord

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I Am Anaya

Date: 4/10/2024 4:12:00 PM

Congratulations Sotto Poet, a devoted love so true. Romantic and ever passions break out the bubbly for the trophy win! ~Anaya

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/7/2024 10:06:00 AM

You string your words together wonderfully Las. Congratulations! :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 4/6/2024 10:28:00 PM

much congrats. God bless and keep you

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 3/9/2024 4:31:00 PM

A sentimental poem of devotion for your love, a delight to have read… Blessings, Beryl

Silent One

Date: 3/9/2024 11:26:00 AM

A lovely poem, Sotto.. nice arrangement of words..

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/9/2024 7:32:00 AM

So wonderfully expressive of love, my friend. Words exude from lifetime of passion for the beloved. Splendidly done, Lasaad.

Karen Jones

Date: 3/8/2024 5:07:00 PM

What a passionate poem of devotion and emotional love! Great job!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/8/2024 4:53:00 PM

dearest Sotto--your poem was a delight to read. I liked the physical structure and your rhyming words. As Ink said, these lines are soulful: "I swore I would never bequeath you, you're my love." In fact, your entire poem is soulful. Have a great evening, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara

Ink Empress

Date: 3/8/2024 12:15:00 PM

Beautiful and you do this form so well always dr sotto, the simplicity of your words and how they flow with such emotive and touching lines that depict devotion is beyond impeccable and worthy of all the accolades, i love especially the opening lines and also how youve written “ walk near me dear. despite, where our lifetime may shove“ how beautiful is that! “ I swore I would never bequeath you, you're my love.“ a line that is truly soulful! And sounds sincere too! Pleasure reading this, BOL

Duke Beaufort

Date: 3/8/2024 12:15:00 PM

SP, This really describes love and how some of us feel about our partners. As you say, we are together regardless of what life throws at us. Beautiful and real it is.