Devine Offerings

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Written 12th June 2025

 Forgiveness is devine offerings
The most humblest best of one’s heart strings
I know because I have plucked that one
And healing of my soul has begun.

When you let the light of life shine through
It’s amazing what our Lord can do
He knows what’s right and He sees wrong
In his arms is where the good belong.

You are safe as can be, He said to me
I am the shepherd of earthly fleece
I grant the peace that you are looking for
Light still shines through your windows and door.

When weathering the storms passing through
The sun will shine again, down on you
Peace is the balm that lessens one’s pain
Helps broken hearts become whole again.

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Bill Baker

Date: 6/20/2025 7:16:00 PM

Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us through your lovely poetry, Beryl. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill a.k.a. Texas Cowboy now :-)

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/21/2025 12:24:00 AM

Thank you Bill, it’s good to see you back :-) Beryl

Duke Beaufort

Date: 6/19/2025 9:27:00 AM

Beryl, a wonderful poem about being made whole. You have the ability to describe the simple truth. Smiles!!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/21/2025 12:22:00 AM

Bless you and thank you Duke, smiles returned.. Beryl

Karen Jones

Date: 6/15/2025 3:05:00 AM

What an inspiring and healing holy write! Love this! It is like medicine! Thanks for sharing!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/15/2025 8:13:00 AM

Thank you so much Karen, I like that you said the poem is like medicine, who could ask for more. Blessings, Beryl

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 6/12/2025 2:17:00 PM

what beautiful words, Beryl, and what a beautiful, special spirit you have! I took comfort in your words, especially the next to the last stanza. Thanks for sharing. You are appreciated, 'yellow'

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/15/2025 8:10:00 AM

Thank you Yellow Rose, your words are appreciated too… Beryl

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/12/2025 10:34:00 AM

Your "Devine Offerings" is a wonderful write. The sun will always come out to help heal a broken heart. Have a lovely/blessed day writing away.................

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/15/2025 8:09:00 AM

Thank you Paula, you’re quite right, the sun will always shine to put sorrowful hearts to right. Have a blessed day too… Beryl