Deviled Eggs

Smooth white orbs, halved and emptied
                                                 Golden centers mashed
                                             Mayo, pickle juice combined
                                                Half orbs mounded high
                                                      Paprika adorned
                                                       Won't last long
                                                                Eat!


11/21/11
For Gwen and Tony's Thanksgiving Epulaeryu Contest


I am thankful for my salvation.

Happy Thanksgiving everyone!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 12/6/2011 6:56:00 PM
An unusual addition to the table..but I love them..can eat a dozen...congrats..sorry its so long in coming. BG
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Date: 12/3/2011 4:39:00 PM
Extra paprika please :) Very nice poem Kim-Congrats. on your win!
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Date: 12/2/2011 9:58:00 PM
I do like deviled eggs! They're brief, but delicious! RAY
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Date: 12/2/2011 9:47:00 PM
I remember this yummy one. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 12/2/2011 11:25:00 AM
Yes they are good but hadn't thought of serving them for Thanksgiving. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 12/2/2011 5:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Gwen's contest Kim. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/1/2011 8:23:00 PM
Hello Miss Kim! This dish was well-dressed! The slam dunk was the descriptive usage of white orb for eggs...how creative, poetess. And the ending was right up my alley---you are right, the Won't Last Long so EAT! lol. Congrats on this winning delight. Thanks for supporting my contest. I am still a novice but I can sense beautiful poetry! Luv, Gwendolen
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Date: 11/23/2011 3:18:00 PM
Tasty write, Kim - I've never tried these and have often wondered what they were, exactly
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Date: 11/21/2011 11:59:00 PM
I LOVE THESE, Kim. Sadly, at MY house, they do not go fast. Only I and my daughter seem to like them!! You came up with a great and original theme for this contest. I hope the judge loves those deviled eggs too!
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