Devil Or Angel

She was an angel sent from heaven; or a demon straight from hell;
She was everything that I should learn, so in heaven I’d do well.
She made me laugh about myself, as I practiced ringing bells;
But somehow she expected that, and everyone she’d tell.
She said I was contagious, she was a lotion for a rash;
But then she stepped all over me, as if I were some trash.

We tussled at the pits of hell, we huddled in the clouds;
We told ourselves that it was love, but we hid beneath a shroud  
Walking down the avenue; it’s obvious I was proud;
Yet often I would notice her, looking to the crowd.
She was everything I needed but she was nothing that I want;
I think she’s out there on a broom; on a witches haunt.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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April 5, 2011 at 11:31 AM
S'like she'd swept you off of your feet, with that 'broom'. A clever and witty write, Leonard! The last line was a great way to send her off, on a broomstick. You work makes me smile or invites me to think. Enjoyed this piece...thank you! Best to you and yours, Mikki
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February 21, 2011 at 7:49 PM
Awwww so sad... But i like it
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