Paloma P Poet Burlesque

Deviant Urges

Deeply rooted dark desires
of every deviant sexual urge,
divine and unconscionably 
naughty primordial  nuances
of sensuality unscrupulously
played out in dreamt midnight
rendezvous or reality if you dare...

it's not so hard to swallow

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James Inman March 25, 2018 at 9:11 AM Interesting write, "deviant-departing from the accepted norm". Don't we all deviate from the norm in some way, at some point in our lives? If we all do, then I guess that becomes the norm and deviation becomes normal.

Paul Callus November 5, 2016 at 5:34 PM Deviant urges come in differently wrapped parcels, Paloma. Dreams and desires often become willing allies in the sharing of thrills which lie dormant, waiting to be released. ~ paul

Justin Bordner November 3, 2016 at 8:55 PM Lust thrill warms the throat of love so thickly...you are a naughty night shade of temptation Paloma...J.A.B.

Just James November 3, 2016 at 12:05 AM Dark Dream but Delightful read..:) it slipped right Down!

Steven Henderson November 2, 2016 at 9:23 AM So got me smiling... may I recommend page four on my poetry page. The adult content section, though start with 'Opening A Door". Peace unto you my many blessings.

Afolabi Muideen November 2, 2016 at 2:12 AM I can relate to this my friend, well penned...........A.M. Paloma P November 2, 2016 at 7:01 AM Happy to hear Afolabi, thanks very much.

Darren White November 2, 2016 at 12:07 AM I love this one... The last line made me smile. Very good! Darren White November 2, 2016 at 7:13 AM ;) Paloma P November 2, 2016 at 6:59 AM Ha I was waiting for that, much appreciated Darren! ;)

Connie Marcum Wong November 2, 2016 at 12:06 AM I can relate to this. I have had some pretty wild dreams especially, the ones that don't make any sense at all. They are just crazy. But sometime you get a dream that inspires and a poem is born. This one is wild and hot Paloma! 7 ; ) Paloma P November 2, 2016 at 6:59 AM Your review brought a poetic smile to my face, many thanks Connie! :)

Probir Gupta November 1, 2016 at 11:46 PM Convert them into your poems ... Very well written ... Paloma P November 2, 2016 at 6:58 AM Indeed, thanks Probir.

White Wolf November 1, 2016 at 6:28 PM You have done it again Paloma. Great pen my friend. Paloma P November 1, 2016 at 7:54 PM Much appreciated Rick. /|\

Chris Green November 1, 2016 at 5:45 PM Oh my, now this is dark and deep and laced with heated desires. I think I just singed my eyelashes reading this one. Paloma, you have done it again, each time when I think I have read your best, you post one that just blows my mind. Love the title too. Paloma P November 1, 2016 at 6:24 PM You're too good to me Chris, it was merely a whim in my muses' eye, sorry about the lashes. :) Much thanks.