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Deviant Urges

Deeply rooted dark desires of every deviant sexual urge, divine and unconscionably naughty primordial nuances of sensuality unscrupulously played out in dreamt midnight rendezvous or reality if you dare... it's not so hard to swallow

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James Inman

Date: 3/25/2018 9:11:00 AM

Interesting write, "deviant-departing from the accepted norm". Don't we all deviate from the norm in some way, at some point in our lives? If we all do, then I guess that becomes the norm and deviation becomes normal.

Paul Callus

Date: 11/5/2016 5:34:00 PM

Deviant urges come in differently wrapped parcels, Paloma. Dreams and desires often become willing allies in the sharing of thrills which lie dormant, waiting to be released. ~ paul

Justin Bordner

Date: 11/3/2016 8:55:00 PM

Lust thrill warms the throat of love so thickly...you are a naughty night shade of temptation Paloma...J.A.B.

Just James

Date: 11/3/2016 12:05:00 AM

Dark Dream but Delightful read..:) it slipped right Down!

Steven Henderson

Date: 11/2/2016 9:23:00 AM

So got me smiling... may I recommend page four on my poetry page. The adult content section, though start with 'Opening A Door". Peace unto you my many blessings.

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 11/2/2016 2:12:00 AM

I can relate to this my friend, well penned...........A.M.

Paloma P
Date: 11/2/2016 7:01:00 AM

Happy to hear Afolabi, thanks very much.

Darren White

Date: 11/2/2016 12:07:00 AM

I love this one... The last line made me smile. Very good!

Darren White
Date: 11/2/2016 7:13:00 AM

;)

Paloma P
Date: 11/2/2016 6:59:00 AM

Ha I was waiting for that, much appreciated Darren! ;)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/2/2016 12:06:00 AM

I can relate to this. I have had some pretty wild dreams especially, the ones that don't make any sense at all. They are just crazy. But sometime you get a dream that inspires and a poem is born. This one is wild and hot Paloma! 7 ; )

Paloma P
Date: 11/2/2016 6:59:00 AM

Your review brought a poetic smile to my face, many thanks Connie! :)

Probir Gupta

Date: 11/1/2016 11:46:00 PM

Convert them into your poems ... Very well written ...

Paloma P
Date: 11/2/2016 6:58:00 AM

Indeed, thanks Probir.

White Wolf

Date: 11/1/2016 6:28:00 PM

You have done it again Paloma. Great pen my friend.

Paloma P
Date: 11/1/2016 7:54:00 PM

Much appreciated Rick. /|\

Chris Green

Date: 11/1/2016 5:45:00 PM

Oh my, now this is dark and deep and laced with heated desires. I think I just singed my eyelashes reading this one. Paloma, you have done it again, each time when I think I have read your best, you post one that just blows my mind. Love the title too.

Paloma P
Date: 11/1/2016 6:24:00 PM

You're too good to me Chris, it was merely a whim in my muses' eye, sorry about the lashes. :) Much thanks.