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Devastation

Emotionally, a wrecked ship Battered to smithereens. Tarred and feathered By the tempestuous ocean wave That is grief. Her faith in the Lord, Blueprint for her reconstruction. Date written: 06/19/2022

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Line Gauthier

Date: 11/10/2022 3:09:00 PM

Lovely brevity, Edward ~

Edward Ibeh
Date: 11/10/2022 9:13:00 PM

Thank you very much for the visit, comment, and my placement, Line:-)

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 6/26/2022 9:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the contest. A deep and moving piece gives us cause for reflection. :)Paulette

Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/26/2022 8:07:00 PM

Thank you very much, Paulette:-)

Karen Jones

Date: 6/24/2022 1:21:00 PM

Eloquent and deep. Well done. Congrats

Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/24/2022 3:11:00 PM

Thank you very much, Karen:-)

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 6/24/2022 3:49:00 AM

So very metaphorical, Edward. Congratulations on your win.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/24/2022 9:13:00 AM

Thank you very much, Subimal:-) Coming from such a great poet, that means alot!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/24/2022 3:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Edward. Blessings xxoo

Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/24/2022 9:14:00 AM

Thanks so much, Connie:-)

Christuraj Alex

Date: 6/23/2022 8:40:00 PM

Faith works. Beautifully written. Congratulations!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/23/2022 8:43:00 PM

Thank you so much, Christuraj:-)

Anisha Dutta

Date: 6/23/2022 8:28:00 AM

Congrats to win on your beautiful poem. Blessings

Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/23/2022 10:42:00 AM

Thank you very much, Anisha:-)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/23/2022 7:25:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A "Wonderful" write. Have a great/blessed day.......................

Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/23/2022 10:42:00 AM

Thank you so much, Paula:-)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/20/2022 5:46:00 PM

Imagery befitting grief!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/23/2022 10:43:00 AM

Thank you, Kim:-)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/20/2022 5:16:00 AM

Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Seems like the woman of whom you have written knows the way to make it home. Your visit to my page was encouraging. Sara

Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/23/2022 10:39:00 AM

Thank you very much, Sara:-)