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Determination Decided like the ant, Don’t give up; move the plant, Declining the word can’t. Driving always forward, Do acts to beat the ‘’nays.’’ Daring yourself onward, Dream of successful days. 8/28/16 Pleiades D - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Kim Merryman Total of Syllables 42

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Date: 9/1/2016 7:21:00 PM
Janis, your poem reminded me of a song called "High Hopes". Great descriptions of "determination"! Congrats on your win! Blessings!
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 9/2/2016 9:50:00 PM
Yes Kim, that's where the ant came from. I guess I'm getting old. I assumed everybody knew the song. Thanks.
Date: 9/1/2016 11:35:00 AM
Your determination saw you through to a merited win, Janis! I like your positive attitude and advice. Congratulations:) Regards // paul
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Date: 9/1/2016 6:27:00 PM
Thanks, Paul
Date: 9/1/2016 4:40:00 AM
- Encouraging poem, Janis - Congratulations on your placement in the contest, with this beautiful write :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 9/1/2016 6:26:00 PM
Thanks for your encouragement.
Date: 9/1/2016 12:31:00 AM
Congratulations on a nice, upbeat, positive winning write, Janis, well done. Regards, Viv
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Date: 9/8/2016 1:57:00 PM
Thanks Viv.
Date: 9/1/2016 12:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Janis. I am so enjoying reading everyones entries. 7 ; )
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Date: 9/1/2016 6:26:00 PM
Thanks, Connie.
Date: 8/31/2016 7:57:00 PM
Janis, wonderful poem lovely lady...congrats on your placement! :)-luloo
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Date: 9/1/2016 12:17:00 AM
Thanks, luloo.
Date: 8/29/2016 6:30:00 AM
A splendid entry for the contest Janis! These just keep getting better and better! 7 ; )
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Date: 8/29/2016 12:21:00 PM
Thanks, Connie.
Date: 8/28/2016 12:38:00 PM
Good words to live by.I enjoyed your verse.
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 8/28/2016 1:21:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by, Darlene.
Date: 8/28/2016 11:41:00 AM
An astute observation of the most determined of creatures...The humble ant! Good luck in the contest, Janis! My best regards. :) john
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Date: 8/28/2016 1:23:00 PM
Thanks, john.

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