Dr. Upma A. Sharma Poet Kyrielle

Destitute Must Thrive

Contrary to the forlorn attitude,
Thrive for the bliss of solitude,
The vulnerable gets incapacitated,
Keep spark of optimism inside alive !

Helpless gets sturdy, will not mentally die,
Heaps of benevolence, keeps living a lie,
Struggles till the woes get precipitated,
Spark of hope always burns alive !

Languishing tribulations seem incumbent,
A muscular man declared impotent,
Munificent heart asthenic and debilitated,
Spark of hope still stays alive !

Miseries are vaporous, only if comprehend,
Toreador if be, will turn vilipend,
Embrace potvaliancy, rather remain paralysed,
Must keep spark of hope alive !




Written on 1/5/14
Sponsor- Cyndi and Tim
Theme- helpless 



Now for contest- ur fav poem u hv ever written
Sponsor- Carol Eastman
My fav coz it's reality based, true feelings of helplessness of the one concerned 
and mine .

Now for contest- Vibrant verse 2
Sponsor- Charlotte Puddifoot

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Kelly Deschler June 19, 2014 at 12:25 AM Well said, Dr. Upma! These are very uplifting words of hope for a better and brighter future. No matter how bad things get, we just have to pick ourselves up and keep going forward.... Congratulations on a win with your favorite poem!

Carol Eastman June 17, 2014 at 12:03 PM Wonderfully written message... And an impressive winning poem. Congratulations on the win and Thank you for entering my contest with it.

Joyce Johnson June 15, 2014 at 7:31 PM We will all need to keep the spark of hope alive, sometime during our lifetime. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Tim Smith June 15, 2014 at 5:09 PM wonderful Dr. Upma..so much truh...hugs Tim

Arlene Smith June 15, 2014 at 11:27 AM Very nice win with such a truth penned.. Sometimes hope is both all we have and just enough.. Hugs. Arlene..

Dr.Ram Mehta June 15, 2014 at 5:59 AM Thanks for sharing your favorite poem, congrats on the well deserved win, Dr.Upma

Pandita Sietesantos June 15, 2014 at 12:24 AM Congratulations,Dr. Upma, on a sweet win for a great write!

Skat A June 15, 2014 at 12:14 AM nice win . Love ~SKAT~

Poet Destroyer A June 14, 2014 at 11:06 PM Dr Upma. Congratulations with your own "Favorite Poem, entered in Carol's XOOL contest... Yeah, we all Win... What a sweet Deal... XOX~ LINDA

Poet Destroyer A June 9, 2014 at 4:14 PM thank you for the reply

Poet Destroyer A June 9, 2014 at 9:56 AM Dr Umpa, Congratulations, on your win in Cyndi's "HELPLESS, KYRIELLE CONTEST." take care -LINDA- Dr. Upma A. Sharma June 9, 2014 at 1:27 PM Thanks Linda !

Tim Ryerson June 6, 2014 at 6:45 PM Cyndi and I both agreed that this should be on the winner's list, Dr. Sharma because it is so relevant, VERY well written and seems to come from personal experience...In addition, as Faye Gibson commented, I need a dictionary!...May I assume that you are a medical doctor? - Tim Dr. Upma A. Sharma June 7, 2014 at 4:04 AM Thanks Tim for ur lovely comments n honoring me,, to be on winner's list,, Yes I m a medical doctor,, n hv wholeheartedly felt the agony of helplessness of my terminally sick patients quite a times,, trying to set spark of hope ablaze is real tough when u urself know there's zero hope,,, but then hv faith in God,,, maybe a medical miracle this time !!!

Andrea Dietrich June 5, 2014 at 9:49 PM congrats on your poem, one that was so positive!! Dr. Upma A. Sharma June 5, 2014 at 10:12 PM Thanks dear ,, appreciate your comments !

Dr.Ram Mehta June 5, 2014 at 2:19 AM Perfect Kyrielle with apt take on the theme, congrats on a fine win, Dr.Upma Dr. Upma A. Sharma June 5, 2014 at 10:13 PM Thaks Dr Ram for ur always encouraging comments.

Cyndi Macmillan June 4, 2014 at 6:20 PM Well, I loved the language, the theme, the unique take (truly a rant, a call to arms against self-pity, interesting!!)... though the last lines did not rhyme, as they should, I could not in all conscience place this lower on the winner's list. The last two lines are slanted rhyme, which works fine. Congrats on the win. I look forward to reading more of your work. Cheers, Cyndi Dr. Upma A. Sharma June 4, 2014 at 10:40 PM Thanks Cyndi ,, i didnt really know the exact way of writing this form n the rhyming part,, though i did google to know abt this one,,, my bad ! Thanks for the placement,,an honor that u did like my poem !

Faye Gibson June 4, 2014 at 3:56 PM Congratulations! Fine win, Dr Sharma. I think I will have to get my dictionary. :-) Dr. Upma A. Sharma June 5, 2014 at 10:14 PM Thanks Faye ,,, appreciate ur wit !

Paul Callus June 4, 2014 at 12:13 PM When the currants are strong and overpowering it is so easy to be at a loss; it is hope and faith that can keep us afloat. (impressive vocabulary!) congrats on a fine win. // paul Dr. Upma A. Sharma June 5, 2014 at 10:26 PM Yes true Paul ! and its so hard to sustain hope in toughest of times,, but then faith is all the more imp to get u go,,, thnx for lovely comments !

Andrea Dietrich May 2, 2014 at 12:28 AM a good one for having high hopes, my friend! Dr. Upma A. Sharma June 5, 2014 at 10:26 PM Thnx Andrea !

Frederic Parker May 1, 2014 at 4:20 PM without hope, there is no tomorrow only the sameness of the days Dr. Upma A. Sharma June 5, 2014 at 10:27 PM Thanks for ur valuable much awaited comments Frederic !

Robert Johnson May 1, 2014 at 10:21 AM A journey of compassion begins in the heart. You have led the way for us to find the path very well. Dr. Upma A. Sharma June 5, 2014 at 10:28 PM Thanks Robert ,, much appreciate ur comments !

Dr.Ram Mehta May 1, 2014 at 9:26 AM Wonderful take on the theme of helplessness, Dr. Upma Dr. Upma A. Sharma June 5, 2014 at 10:29 PM Thanks dr Ram !