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Posted - 10th October 2023
A fictional write 

Destiny's Door - Fiction

Nothing eases the unending sorrow Of lost love that brought joy to each morrow Wish there was something that could ease the pain Of longing to be together again.
Whatever happened to romance we knew The love once cherished by both me and you On carpets of roses we both did lay Once upon many a whimsical day. Blissful were the days and tender the nights As we soared splendiferous giddy heights Held safe in your loving arms the hours flew Why oh why sweetheart did you say we’re through. You'd write poetry for my eyes only Ecstatic as a lark, I'd surely be Now you are gone, disappeared without trace In midst of silence my lonesome heart aches. I have adored you from when we started How I wish that we had never parted Mister magnifico you were to me My romeo, my buzzing honeybee. We won't be singing love songs anymore I’m heartbroken and will wait evermore To dance in your arms o’er rainbows again Should we reunite in heaven’s domain. Just for you whom I’m delirious for The key to my heart’s at destiny’s door.
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M  Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 4:05 AM
Congratulations Belle on a well deserved POTD!! A beautiful, sad heart grabbing poem….Debx
Y. Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 12:59 PM
WoW! Belle, This is moving and touching. Congratulations on a well-deserved poem of the day:-) Alexis
Edmonds  Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 11:43 PM
Thank you PoetrySoup team, I am truly honoured and pleased to have had this poem awarded poem of the day… Belle
Bangalee Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 11:19 PM
Just for you whom I’m delirious for The key to my heart’s at destiny’s door.// wow just great writing and great reading ; superb poem penned; congrats for selecting the poem as POD
One Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 5:44 AM
I agree with your words, there is no sorrownlike this...Congratulations on POTD
Edmonds  Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 5:11 PM
Thank you very much Silent One… Belle
Daniel Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 4:35 AM
This is so touching, Belle, belated congratulations on POTD:)
Edmonds  Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 5:10 PM
Thank you Joanna-:) Belle
Allison Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 2:05 AM
I know your poem is fictional for you Belle but sadly it is one many can relate to, belated congrats on POTD. soup mail:-) hugs Jan xx
Edmonds  Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 5:09 PM
Thank you Jan… Hugs, Belle xx
La France Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 10:41 PM
Belle, a beautiful poem and congratulation on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor.
Edmonds  Avatar
October 13, 2023 at 2:41 PM
Thank you Constance, I’m overwhelmed by the responses I’ve received and of course delighted to have had the honour of poem of the day… Belle
Williams Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 7:45 PM
A beautiful poem of love and loss Belle. Congratulations on POTD. Hugs
Edmonds  Avatar
October 13, 2023 at 2:38 PM
Thank you very much Maria, very grateful I am. Hugs, Belle
Nicole Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 7:04 PM
This is beautiful, tender, and emotional, all at the same time. I can feel the longing within, a heart aching for the love it once knew. Your thoughts caress softly around me. Congratulations Belle, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Edmonds  Avatar
October 13, 2023 at 2:37 PM
Thank you so much Brandy, those kind, generous words on this poem are truly appreciated. Hugs, Belle
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 6:57 PM
Congrats, well deserved POTD. Belle, nice to meet you, will visit your site.
Edmonds  Avatar
October 13, 2023 at 2:35 PM
Thank you Barbara, nice to meet you too, will visit your site also… Belle
Situation Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 5:56 PM
Congrads on POTD. This is a sad piece that so many find themselves in.
Edmonds  Avatar
October 13, 2023 at 2:32 PM
Thank you and bless you The Situation… Belle
Ray Choudhury Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 5:48 PM
Congratulations, Dear Belle, on this emotional, sad but stunning expression of lost love! My heart aches to imagine what some souls go through, and how they long to be with their sweethearts again - "To dance in your arms o’er rainbows again Should we reunite in heaven’s domain." Hugs, Dear Poet.
Edmonds  Avatar
October 13, 2023 at 2:31 PM
Thank you Malabika, I’m truly grateful for your kind review on this poem. Hugs in return, Belle
Kauffman Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 4:06 PM
Written from a plaintive, aching, heart, Belle, that finds itself alone with only dashed hopes for the future as comfort. Congratulations on your POTD! Blessings of comfort!
Edmonds  Avatar
October 13, 2023 at 2:27 PM
Thank you Sam, although the poem is fictional I wrote it from seeing how heartbreaking it is when love parts for whatever reason. Blessing to you in return… Belle
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 4:05 PM
Hello Belle, this poem is beautifully done. Congratulations on your POTD. Enjoy your evening. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 11:45 AM
Hello Belle, your welcome my friend. Hugs. /Darlene\
Edmonds  Avatar
October 13, 2023 at 2:02 PM
Thank you and bless you Darlene, I appreciate your comments very much… Belle
Hawkins Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 2:18 PM
WOW! Congratulations on your POTD win, Belle. I thought it was true. From the title to the end, it was captivating. I hope you have a lovely day with your husband. Take care, Shirley
Edmonds  Avatar
October 13, 2023 at 2:01 PM
Thank you Shirley, yes the poem is completely fictional. I’m so pleased you enjoyed reading this end of love story/poem… Blessings, Belle
Goldsmith Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 1:10 PM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A lovely write/story/ending. Have a very blessed day with your win...................
Edmonds  Avatar
October 13, 2023 at 1:57 PM
Thank you very much Paula, I’m so pleased you enjoyed the read, I’ve enjoyed the day and feel truly blessed… Belle
Proxenos Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 1:03 PM
Belle my dear friend, what a magnificent poem, a love story which brings tears to the sentimental and emotional, intense romance at its best. Congratulations my friend on the honor bestowed upon you which is so truly deserved. HUGS AND BLESSINGS, Jennifer.
Edmonds  Avatar
October 13, 2023 at 1:54 PM
Thank you Jennifer, blessings and hugs to you too in return. I’m so pleased you liked this fictional love story poem, congratulations for poem of the day gratefully received. Belle
Anaya Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 10:32 AM
Destiny has a way of taking a lovers whimsical day away "Mister magnifico you were to me. My romeo, my buzzing honeybee" you are so sweet. Congratulations on your POTD Belle!! Delighted to see this love story today, enjoy your day. :D
Edmonds  Avatar
October 13, 2023 at 2:57 AM
Thank you so much Anaya, I truly appreciate your comments on this poem, I’ve had a lovely day… Belle
Fowler Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 7:11 AM
Sweet, romantic write Belle. Just lovely and a well-deserved POTD. Congratulations! :)
Edmonds  Avatar
October 13, 2023 at 2:55 AM
Thank you Linda, it’s an honour and I’m pleased as punch… Belle
Pandit Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 6:02 AM
BIG congrats on POTD, Belle. Fiction it may be--it still speaks to hearts. Enjoy your special day today.
Edmonds  Avatar
October 13, 2023 at 2:52 AM
Thank you Vijay, definitely fiction, poetic license for sure. I’ve enjoyed the day immensely… Belle
Poet Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 5:59 AM
Back with hearty congratulations on POTD, and also sorry for the misunderstanding happy that Alen is beside you.
Edmonds  Avatar
October 13, 2023 at 2:43 AM
Thank you Sotto, I can understand why you thought what you did, the poem came from knowing other couples sad circumstances…. Belle
Goyal Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 4:29 AM
Enjoyed this rhyme! Found it a bit sad but enjoyed it. Congrats on POTD :-)
Edmonds  Avatar
October 13, 2023 at 2:31 AM
So pleased you enjoyed the read Arastu, thank you very much indeed for the congratulations. Belle
Kitchin Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 4:05 AM
Belle, wonderfully penned, congratulations on POTD!
Edmonds  Avatar
October 13, 2023 at 2:29 AM
Thank you so much Tania, this came as a wonderful surprise . Belle
Messina Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 3:50 AM
So beautiful, Belle. I am possitive you will reunite again at destiny's door. Love this! Congratulations on POTD! Hugs
Edmonds  Avatar
October 13, 2023 at 2:28 AM
Thank you very much Charles, though the poem is fictional I truly appreciate your commenting and the congratulations… Belle
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