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Destiny's Chance

When the rain had stopped giving earth her bath, And sunrays shone upon the winding path, I sauntered slowly to that great abyss. My wandering had never felt such wrath. Fleshy mushrooms growing on either side, Where the Angel of Death could never hide. Her whiteness invited a peaceful taste. Feeling the texture my tongue still inside. Something eccentric was calling my soul. Trickling water had filled the sinkhole. Mother earth had swallowed the raging flood. I heard my mind screaming, “Jump from this knoll!” Forty-five feet down should stop endless pain. I remember making love in the rain. Laughing for hours while our wetness dripped. Will butterflies visit daisies again? Such dark reflections traverse the expanse. Birds sing again; make the two of us dance. A yellow warbler on a fallen tree – Today destiny cries for one more chance. Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Written for INTO NIGHT'S DWELLING Contest January 13, 2014

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Date: 1/17/2014 8:51:00 AM
this one sings, dane anne.. congrats on your award in my contest.. huggs
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 1/18/2014 8:21:00 AM
Thank you so much Nette. I didn't realize I had been awarded for this write. It was very personal. So, I am glad to hear this good news from you. Big Smiles, Dane
Date: 1/13/2014 4:08:00 PM
Beautiful, Dane Ann. Destiny's cry has saved a few souls from jumping into the knoll, I am sure. I sense depression, reminiscence and hope all mixed in this verse. An emotional mixture that you serve up so well. Thanks for sharing. Joe
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 1/15/2014 7:46:00 AM
Thanks, Joe, for stopping by to read my poem and for taking the time to comment. I really appreciate it. So happy to be sharing on the Soup, again. And then, the garden will call, come spring. But I hope to keep posting here. It is nice to see you, again. Big Smiles, Dane Ann

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