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I think destiny, fate, choice are always mingling, My life has been written, the present, future, past; Oh, the past of my life- I am ever visiting. My existence has been a ravaged garden weeping, It is littered with sadness and rapture vast; I think destiny, fate, choice are always mingling. Destiny made a poet out of a girl scribbling, The people in this play are members of the cast; Oh, the past of my life- I am ever visiting. Fate has taken me to dark places crippling, Falling and getting up, all the years moving fast; I think destiny, fate, choice are always mingling. Choice, I could have dwelled in the dark lingering, But, no, I fought with a life proclaiming blast; Oh, the past of my life- I am ever visiting. The poet in me is able to write the bleeding, Although tangled, I have found my destiny at last; I think destiny, fate, choice are always mingling, Oh, the past of my life- I am ever visiting ______________________________ April 18, 2016 Poetry/Villanelle/Destiny Copyright Protected, ID 16- 779-224-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Destiny or Choices Nayda Ivette Negron First Place

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Date: 4/28/2016 12:10:00 AM
Broken, well done on your win. Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 4/28/2016 7:45:00 AM
Linda, thanks for the compliment ~/
Date: 4/26/2016 4:26:00 AM
I love the way you've fused philosophy with your own self!!! Congrats BW, for your well, deserved first placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 4/26/2016 4:26:00 PM
Teddy thanks for the great comment and the congrats !!
Date: 4/20/2016 10:55:00 PM
I just loved this and obvious that you place first! Hugs!
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Date: 4/24/2016 8:21:00 AM
Arthur, thanks for the love and the compliment and hugs !!!
Date: 4/20/2016 3:05:00 PM
Congrats on your great win my lovely frind. Loved always, bl
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Date: 4/24/2016 8:21:00 AM
BL thanks for the congrats and the love !!
Date: 4/20/2016 10:06:00 AM
A big congratulations on your wonderful win:)
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Date: 4/24/2016 8:22:00 AM
Jo, thanks for the congratulation and the wonderful !!
Date: 4/20/2016 7:22:00 AM
WOW.....and another .... WOW...This is so full of both sadness and hope..mingling. Well done BW, well deserved placement.
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Date: 4/24/2016 8:23:00 AM
John, thanks so much for the compliments, appreciate !!!!
Date: 4/19/2016 10:19:00 PM
Ah magnificent write dear Broken.. past is tough to be forgotten.. memories r s'thing afterall.. congrats on much deserved top podium!!
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Date: 4/24/2016 8:23:00 AM
Upma, thanks for the magnificent and the congrats ~
Date: 4/19/2016 9:31:00 PM
Hi Broken Wings, Fabulous write, very expressive and, though deeply personal, evocative of deep and universal themes that many of us here can relate to, no doubt. Congrats on your First Place Win! Cheers, Brian
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Date: 4/24/2016 8:24:00 AM
Brian, thanks for the wonderful comment and the congrats ~
Date: 4/19/2016 9:03:00 PM
First congrats on your First Place Win! Destiny Fate and Choice definitely made a Poet of you Broken Wings and a pleasure in life is to read your works!
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Date: 4/24/2016 8:25:00 AM
Walter, thanks for the congrats and the compliments !!
Date: 4/19/2016 3:48:00 PM
Grr the soup gremlin strikes again I commented on this only yesterday:-( many congrats on your win my friend:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/24/2016 8:26:00 AM
Jan, yes, I just got my poem in on time, thanks for the congrats !
Date: 4/19/2016 3:25:00 PM
wow, a brand new one using villanelle style. superb writing for this contest, Constance. Congrats on number one spot Everything you are saying in this poem is SO TRUE about yourself.
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Date: 4/24/2016 8:27:00 AM
Andrea, thanks for the compliments and the congrats !
Date: 4/19/2016 3:18:00 PM
Very beautiful how you wove your destiny, fate and choices, Broken Wings. This mingling has made you a wonderful poet with compassion and strength. Congratulations on your First Place win! 7 ~ Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/24/2016 8:28:00 AM
Sandra, thanks for the beautiful and wonderful and the congratulations, 7 and hugs !!!!
Date: 4/19/2016 3:08:00 PM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Constance
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Date: 4/24/2016 8:29:00 AM
Nayda, thanks for a great contest and my great win !
Date: 4/19/2016 1:51:00 PM
I love the structure, you've inspired me to try this form as well. love it thanks.
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Date: 4/24/2016 8:30:00 AM
James, thanks for visiting and do try the form, I love it ~
Date: 4/19/2016 9:52:00 AM
Well written, Broken Wings. Perhaps our future depends upon our struggle with the past.
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Date: 4/24/2016 8:31:00 AM
Barry, thanks so much for visiting my poem, appreciate !
Date: 4/18/2016 8:41:00 PM
very beautiful and I am so glad you fought like I ~ with love, jill
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Date: 4/24/2016 8:32:00 AM
Jill, thanks so much for the beautiful ~