Destiny

Destiny Bobbing hopelessly amid the melting ice floes Polar destiny John G. Lawless 6/8/2014

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John Michaels

Date: 7/10/2014 4:29:00 AM

Nice write! A vivid, yet simultaneously depressing, image! Congratulations on your win!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/4/2014 9:42:00 AM

oh, for those poor polar bears, hey are so doomed. BIG congrats, I love how you did your poem.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/1/2014 5:08:00 AM

Beautiful approach to destiny with images conveying a great message, John, congrats on the win

Theresa Stephens

Date: 7/1/2014 3:27:00 AM

Hi John, Congrats and enjoyed reading your destiny haiku. Regards Theresa xx

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/30/2014 10:01:00 PM

Good, good, good. I would have placed this higher..congrats. BG

Arlene Smith

Date: 6/30/2014 9:23:00 PM

Congrats on a great win, John. Hugs.. Arlene

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/30/2014 4:33:00 PM

Hi John, a huge congratulations to you, my friend for your fine win! Great Haiku. Warmest regards. Pandita

Paul Callus

Date: 6/30/2014 3:36:00 PM

Oh this is good! Love the image and the meaning behind it. Congratulations on a merited win! // paul

Len Gasun

Date: 6/30/2014 11:28:00 AM

Congratulations my dear friend John for an awesome haiku with a theme and title, “destiny”. Thanks a lot for your loving support. Big Hugs! Love lots, Leonora

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2014 9:20:00 AM

John, well done, for a haiku...Linda

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/8/2014 1:24:00 PM

perfect, perfect. I know this will do well JOhn. BG