DESTINY

the bridge
to achievement 
waits till I find my niche
as does destiny and my own
raw itch
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Wolf Avatar
January 21, 2026 at 8:21 PM
That 'raw itch' is such an explosive phrase. Packs a real wallop. ~ Tee En Tee
Hind Avatar
January 21, 2026 at 5:42 PM
Very nice!! CayCay, thanks for your words on my poetry- sorry I haven't had the chance to respond until now. Big Hugs!! I like your take on this. Great cinquain
Dietrich Avatar
January 21, 2026 at 10:07 AM
Very cool. And I liked how you did internal rhyme . Same way I did mine. Sure hope at least one of us makes good in this contest
Jones Avatar
January 21, 2026 at 6:38 AM
Clever! I admire your ability to write such poignancy in brevity CayCay. Best wishes for a contest win!
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