Destiny

Did you seek the all so cool Did you see the mortal fool Waited for eternity at the bus stop of life Old man of destiny, dust became your wife Watch the woman on the train go by See the decision in her eyes, she sighs Running away for the final time But only as far as destiny’s line See the tramp as he stumbles down To the depths of dirt that lays around Watch his eyes as he hears the sound You can’t go lower than destiny’s ground Call the girl who loves so well Fondle her breasts, the erogenous smell She will do things you never can tell But when the woman finds out Then destiny's hell.

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/3/2023 10:48:00 AM

- When the woman finds out...of course fate becomes hell :) - Great written, Paul - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) -

Paul Bell
Date: 5/4/2023 6:59:00 AM

Never diss the woman. lol

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/2/2023 9:30:00 PM

Congratulations on writing such a great poem with poetry's elegance in my contest.

Paul Bell
Date: 5/3/2023 2:29:00 AM

Thanks, Sotto, great contest.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 1/14/2023 4:00:00 AM

Good Morning Paul. With a title such as destiny I had to turn the page. Please allow me to let your most poetic entry tone and voice stand. There is nothing I could add. Your entry is very much poetry and poetic. It is an entry that must be read out loud with emphasis and emotion. Thank you for sharing. It was an honor turning to your page this morning.

Paul Bell
Date: 1/15/2023 3:01:00 AM

Glad you liked it, Lisa.