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Destiny - Sirens

Wind and wave conspire Though you are not safe harbour I do not resist

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Date: 3/25/2023 11:18:00 AM

Dear Dilly, the potent brevity of your poem captures tempestuous surrender with beauty and finesse. Love it! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/25/2023 11:45:00 AM

Thanks Susan - I enjoy creating poems from different angles and sometimes saying very little can still tell a whole story.

Date: 3/25/2023 8:37:00 AM

i picked this at random & very glad I did - very creative in so few lines

Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/25/2023 8:58:00 AM

Thanks Jack, it accompanies a poem where I used all the character allowance for the same idea haha, glad you liked it :)

Date: 3/24/2023 7:40:00 PM

Interesting poem DD Unusually concise, but it has a lot to say. Well done.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/24/2023 11:01:00 PM

I thought just in case no one can be bothered with the billion line version, I'll write a tiny one too!

Date: 3/24/2023 1:51:00 AM

Succinct, DD:)

Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/24/2023 2:13:00 AM

Thanks Jo, two versions - so made one quick to read :)