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A shooting star streaks from on high like a kamikaze firefly, whose fiery death's mandatory upon grazing Earth's atmosphere. Yet, there's no time to shed a tear for its blaze is transitory. A trail of sparks inks its pathway as it plummets to its demise. Like in a fairytale story, its epithet soon fizzles out. But its beauty's never in doubt; darkness, amplifies its glory. A shooting star streaks from on high, while its descent warrants a sigh. A blaze of sparks lights up the night yet vaporizes in a flash, ending its suicidal dash. It's such a spectacular sight; that folks cast a wish upon it. But it'll vanish lickety-split, so the timing has to be right. If you don't cast it straight away, you'll lose your wish, so don't delay. It must be cast during its flight. A shooting star's destined to die: but in doing so, achieves flight, burning its way across the sky.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/9/2018 12:15:00 PM
The kamikaze firefly has delighted me beyond belief, but the entire poem was written by a maestro; I am in awe. I have started taking notes, as I am still not certain what verse is, but I know if you have called this verse, it is, my friend.
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Date: 10/10/2018 8:44:00 AM
Thank you so much Caren, I truly appreciate you comments my friend... here is a simple definition of verse my friend..."Verse" is used as a general term for any metrical composition outside of any other form. Emile.
Date: 10/9/2018 10:12:00 AM
Lovely, Emile. Enjoyed your poem.
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Date: 10/9/2018 11:39:00 AM
Thanks Line, your visits are the highlight of my day my friend, Emile.

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