Dessert

Delicate strawberries Dipped in vanilla cream, Dazzling profiteroles, Delicious peach cobbler, Delightful apple tarts, Delectable brownies Dizzy me with desire August 27, 2016 For contest Pleiades – D Sponsored by Kim Merryman 2nd place (shared)

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Line Gauthier

Date: 7/17/2018 4:00:00 PM

What a delicious poem, Agnes. Fit for the finest gourmet!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/4/2016 2:25:00 PM

Yummy! Congrats!

Agnes Krampe
Date: 9/4/2016 3:17:00 PM

Thanks, Kim.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/2/2016 8:03:00 PM

Loving this one again. BIG congrats for your win.

Agnes Krampe
Date: 9/2/2016 8:23:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea.

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/1/2016 5:49:00 PM

A "delicious" write, Agnes! Excellent portrayal of your title. Congrats on your 2nd place win! Blessings!

Agnes Krampe
Date: 9/1/2016 7:56:00 PM

Thank you Kim; glad you liked it :)

Caycay Jennings

Date: 9/1/2016 4:27:00 PM

Congratulations, Agnes - I adore your write and am so glad I read it on a full tummy or I'd be hard pressed to find something sweet in my kitchen. Extremely creative ... CayCay

Agnes Krampe
Date: 9/1/2016 4:55:00 PM

Thank you so much, CayCay.

Paul Callus

Date: 9/1/2016 11:13:00 AM

I knew this would do well, Agnes:) Pleased to be back with congratulations! By the way...."Creme Brulee" would have been perfectly ok. ~ Regards // paul

Agnes Krampe
Date: 9/1/2016 11:37:00 AM

Thanks, Paul :)

Laura Hay

Date: 9/1/2016 9:30:00 AM

Dizzy with disire myself now, great little poem, well done on your placement too! Warm regards, Laura.

Agnes Krampe
Date: 9/1/2016 11:37:00 AM

Thanks, Laura.

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 9/1/2016 3:53:00 AM

This is true and funny. Congratulations. I will have a lettuce leaf, but wait for the evening...Congratulations, Kai

Agnes Krampe
Date: 9/1/2016 6:36:00 AM

Thanks, Kai. Enjoy your lettuce :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/1/2016 3:27:00 AM

- Sounds delicious, Agnes :) - Congratulations on your placement in the contest, with this beautiful write :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Agnes Krampe
Date: 9/1/2016 6:37:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise.

Janis Thompson

Date: 9/1/2016 12:48:00 AM

Delicious poem. Great imagery. Congratulations.

Agnes Krampe
Date: 9/1/2016 1:01:00 AM

Thank you, Janis.

Viv Wigley

Date: 9/1/2016 12:23:00 AM

COngratulations, Agnes, on a winning write, and also making me hunger for sweet things at 06:15 in the morning. Viv x

Agnes Krampe
Date: 9/1/2016 1:01:00 AM

Thank you, Viv :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/31/2016 11:59:00 PM

I am so happy to see this place high Agnes. You know how much I loved it! Congratulations! ; )

Agnes Krampe
Date: 9/1/2016 12:17:00 AM

Thank you so much, Connie - same goes for yours :)

Sandra Haight

Date: 8/31/2016 10:27:00 PM

Yum...D for delicious...both the desserts and your lovely Pleiades poem! Congratulations on your fine 2nd Place win, Agnes. Hugs, Sandra

Agnes Krampe
Date: 9/1/2016 12:18:00 AM

Thank you, Sandra.

Lu Loo

Date: 8/31/2016 7:52:00 PM

Agnes, congrats on your placement :)-luloo

Agnes Krampe
Date: 8/31/2016 8:43:00 PM

Thank you, luloo

Jan Allison

Date: 8/31/2016 7:37:00 PM

oh you have got me drooling Agnes - many cograts on you win:-) I see your comments regarding the syllable counter - the most accurate one is howmanysyllables ... although it does have its discrepancies at times:-( If you put on your entry which counter you used it would hopefully stop any issues:-) to me creme brule is definitely 3 syllables:-) hugs Jan xx

Agnes Krampe
Date: 8/31/2016 8:42:00 PM

Thanks, Jan. I did use howmanysyllables, and it counted it differently depending on whether I had the accent or not, and so did poetrysoup. Very odd. Just decided peach cobbler is yummy, too. :) I liked you Pleiades D, too.

Paul Callus

Date: 8/29/2016 5:55:00 PM

You sure know how to spoil your readers, Agnes:) I love your tempting dessert; hope Kim is of my same opinion! Regards // paul

Agnes Krampe
Date: 8/29/2016 9:26:00 PM

Thanks, Paul. Actually, it would have been even more tempting since I would have liked Creme Brulee instead of peach cobbler, but the syllable counters could not agree with one another and also counted creme with one or two syllables depending on whether I included the accent or not. Hence, unambiguously, peach cobbler.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/29/2016 3:25:00 PM

a YUMMY poem. yes, I likes it!!

Agnes Krampe
Date: 8/29/2016 4:49:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/29/2016 6:04:00 AM

Your last line made me giggle Agnes. I think this entry will do great in the contest! Yummy! I loved it! 7 ; )

Agnes Krampe
Date: 8/29/2016 6:46:00 AM

Thank you, Connie.