Despondency

Late winter
Endless winter
Trees lay bare branches across the grey sky
Their leaves dried by March wind
Brown as putrid skin
Ground squirrels scurry round
Hunting up buried nuts
Some climb trees to very top
Lookouts     for     predators
Birds don't know which way to fly
A pile of white feathers lay
Where a famished hawk devoured its prey
And three great black crows
Sit in the everlasting pine
With shrieking comment all morning long
This a daily ritual
While at noon one may see
O'er bent the rot and lingering snow
An old    old couple
Out with rake and hoe
Trying to inveigle spring

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 1/14/2011 9:10:00 AM
wow, you really painted despondency. I know you hate winter as much as I do, and in mIchigan YUK. the winters must really suck. Well, I am going to finally see the one movie today that will be up for an OScar which I have not been able to see, the King's speech. I hope so anyway! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/14/2011 9:10:00 AM
ps It was super cool to see this poem I had missed. Probably I had skipped it for the title.haha. And yet it's one of your best!
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Date: 1/3/2011 3:24:00 PM
Very descriptive and expressive work, Daver...I am glad that your hip surgery was successful and you have had many years of good use from it..Our son is only 47 years old and has had to have this done..It was caused by cortisone that he took either one or two years ago..He had to have some because of pneumonia and then he developed a skin problem and the dr prescribed it for a month..It caused the bone to die..We need to all see what we could come up with to add to a bucket list as a group.Sara
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Date: 4/1/2009 3:39:00 PM
YOur images are amazing daver! I sat shivering through this poem and the image of the old couple is so point on! I am actually just north of where you were in Denver. I'm in Greeley! Howdy neighbor! Small world!
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Date: 3/30/2009 7:17:00 AM
'...inveigle' is a super word! The atmosphere you create with your descriptive phrasing and imagery is so akin to despondency it leaps off the page and into our hearts. Well done Daver! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 3/27/2009 5:18:00 AM
Spring. Weeds, shrubs totaled by winter, fig tree by the lake burgeoning, know it's almost here on my Amelia Island. Saturday I did yard work until I fell in the bed with exhaustion. I am getting to your poems, one by one. Thanks for comments on "Finis" Where is he now who broke my heart?
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Date: 3/24/2009 7:07:00 AM
Gosh, you are smoking, the last line is so powerful, ganja inspiration tops (laugh). Love it. Peace
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Date: 3/22/2009 2:58:00 PM
stunning imagery and poem!
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Date: 3/21/2009 2:40:00 AM
LOVE this Daver, love it's simple photography, and haunting quality. brilliant. and as for 3 crows together, I just did yesterday out my back door, and made a point of remembering it, as i thought it was so cool. maybe good luck for us then. :) Love, Kristin
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Date: 3/20/2009 7:58:00 AM
I think you have captured the essence of poetic imagery in this one, Daver. Love the way you describe the trees, squirrels and birds. And I smiled thinking of the "old couple...trying to inveigle spring." Nice work! Have you read Nola P's tribute to you?
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Date: 3/20/2009 7:34:00 AM
I know the dreariness you write of, and here we had a lovely few hours of snow this first Spring morn. Those crows, is it me, or don't they just annoy the #### out of you? Probably just me. I love your honest take on the seemingly agonizing wait for the next season. And I say, let's hear it for the old couple! Love, Shar
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Date: 3/20/2009 7:10:00 AM
What a nice poem Daver, I've got yard work on the calendar for this weekend and a hoe with your name on it....do you need the address again?
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