Desperate Wishes Cast

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where, in the shadow of a winter moon
beyond eternal skylines collecting stars,
does affection unfold in the sheets
of a nighttime whispering on the breeze

desperate wishes cast as stones on a pond,
smooth surfaces now laced with ripples,
spherical patterns meandering towards
a slumbering shoreline, drifting inward

a silhouette of love, an angelic form peers,
soft mahogany eyes reflecting yesterdays worries,
offering visions of a tomorrow woven between
today's dreams and desires, waits silently

thoughts echo through the dense forest,
evergreens listen as footsteps forage for a path,
a lone figure in the dark, beneath a braided canopy,
a mosaic of memories luring instincts and needs

winding a way through bramble and thistle,
scars fend off thorns, flesh withers in fear lost
within the mist of past encounters, pained
reminders though welcomed just the same

when in a clearing he pauses amidst swaying reeds,
perusing a distant horizon, witnessing the final ripple
slowly making it's way to the place she stood, now
vacant as a faint sliver of morning appears

falling to his knees
he pleads for the return of the winter moon,
the return of its shadow,
the return of...

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Date: 2/29/2020 4:32:00 AM
Nice Panagiota Congrats Woo-Hoo!
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Date: 2/29/2020 12:51:00 AM
Love the imagery in your lines and congrats on the honour of POTD. Tom
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Date: 2/29/2020 12:03:00 AM
Lovely imagery, Chris. Congrats on your POTD.
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Date: 2/28/2020 6:47:00 PM
back to say congratulations on POTD... to me all of your poems deserve the honor... hugs
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Date: 2/28/2020 2:28:00 PM
Hello Chris, wow! This is a great poem for Poetry of The Day. Enjoyed reading this poem. Love and Joy. Darlene
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Date: 2/28/2020 1:49:00 PM
Oh my!! Your thoughts leave me breathless. I feel like I am there in the moment. You know how to create the mood and simply hold it. Congratulations Chris, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
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Date: 2/28/2020 1:14:00 PM
Such elegance and poise. This is a definite work of art. Congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 2/28/2020 1:00:00 PM
A great poem by a great poet. I absolutely loved this. So deserving of the p.o.t.d. recognition! Heartiest congrats!
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Date: 2/28/2020 12:51:00 PM
Beautiful and so poetic, Chris. You've captured that longing so well. Congrats on the POTD ~ John
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Date: 2/28/2020 12:42:00 PM
Chris, congratulations on receiving POTD with your wonderful poem, enjoy the honor _Constance
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Date: 2/28/2020 11:30:00 AM
Congratulations for POTD Chris :)
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Date: 2/28/2020 11:29:00 AM
your talent shines as brightly as the moon, congrats on POTD Chris:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/28/2020 11:09:00 AM
Oh, how beautiful!
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Date: 2/28/2020 10:40:00 AM
Chris, Congratulations on your POTD. Such vivid imagery, strong verbs "meandering," and great flow in your story. Impressive!
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Date: 2/28/2020 10:31:00 AM
Once the moon gets dragged in, anything can happen... a most enjoyable read, Chris. Congratulations on POTD:) Have a great weekend!
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Date: 2/28/2020 8:21:00 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/28/2020 7:42:00 AM
WoW! Chris, Great write like always. You captive your reader every time .Good content and imagery. Your talent shines through in everything you write. Congratulations on getting the poem of day. It was well deserved. Have a great day and weekend my friend:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/28/2020 6:47:00 AM
Congrats Chris on poem of the day--lovely poem as always.
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Date: 2/28/2020 6:06:00 AM
Brilliant writing my friend...Congrats!! on POTD!! Chris...all the best from the Wingster...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 2/28/2020 4:37:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD, beautiful imagery!
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Date: 2/27/2020 11:11:00 AM
The longing ever strong...the Winter moon, a sinking feeling of loss. Nicely done!
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Date: 2/27/2020 10:23:00 AM
This is beautifully written Chris. I can imagine many people identifying with this right now. Thank you for sharing :)
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Date: 2/27/2020 8:56:00 AM
I can just feel my knees buckling as hope sinks into the water -- total identification with this masterful poem! Thanks, Chris! :) gw
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Date: 2/27/2020 4:40:00 AM
- A fantastic poem, Chris ... the visual says something the text doesn't say - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/27/2020 7:30:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise for all of your support. It is wonderful people like you who make writing worthwhile.
Date: 2/26/2020 10:28:00 PM
Lovely Chris, what is still the question...
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Date: 2/27/2020 7:29:00 AM
Thank you Charlie, so very much
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