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The Good Girl

The Good Girl Penny has always been a good girl, now she is a good wife. She lives in a good neighborhood, drives a nice car, has two perfect children. Her husband is a doctor and to top it off he is very good looking. Her friends think she has the perfect life and, yet she feels a hunger inside. Steven is a man of structure, everything has a time and place. He's the kind of man who folds his underwear. His appearance is immaculate in fact he even presses his jeans. He approaches his love making with a similar precision removing perfectly pressed pajamas folding them and putting them at the foot of the bed and then goes under the covers. She being a good Catholic wife she turns off the lights, undresses and gets into bed beside him. He fondles her breasts for a few moments and then gets on top of her for the Missionary express. The express train never seems to go past the three-minute mark. He then rolls over and exactly two minutes later he is fast asleep. At that point she takes things into her own hands. In the morning after Steven has left for work she showers, the warm water nourishes her hunger. She removes the shower head and adjusts it to pulsating! She places it between her legs and Ironically in three minutes she arrives where her husband has never taken her. A moan escapes her lips as she feels her release, yet she stifles it so her children won't hear, after all she is a good girl and good girls don't do such things. She gets out of the shower and wipes the steam from the mirror with her towel. There she stands in front of the mirror looking at her naked form. Blonde with pretty blue eyes, the proof of her hair color is down below. She gazes at her breasts, lifts them slightly and smiles, gravity has not been too unkind. Her skin is bronzed from her tanning sessions and she has a perfectly sculpted abdomen from her hours at the gym, still she feels somehow that she doesn't measure up, not tall enough and she wonders if her boobs are on the small side. She thinks back to when She was a "Saint Mary's" girl. Mom and dad didn't want her to be distracted by boys, so they sent her to Catholic school. She wonders if this is where the hunger first began. Her friend Becky had brought a Play Girl magazine to school and together they had flipped through the pages. They had giggled as they viewed the pictures. She had seen her brother's thing once when she had walked in on him peeing, but it was nothing like what was in the pictures. She had found the pictures both gross and exciting at the same time. She remembered the warm dampness in her hello kitty panties. She had felt so guilty but in some way also awakened to another more primal part of herself. Confession was much more interesting that week. She was brought back to the present by the sound of one of her kids slamming their bathroom door. She promptly gets dressed and goes down stairs to prepare them breakfast. One egg each sunny side up with a side of whole wheat toast and a sliced banana. She pours a glass of milk for each of them and calls them down to breakfast. They both come running into the kitchen with backpacks in hand, give her a kiss and eat their breakfast. Her son Jessie has blonde hair and blue eyes just like her and their daughter takes more after her dad with chestnut hair but with exotic green eyes. Time passes quickly and it's time to drive them to school. She drops them off to school, kisses her daughter goodbye but refrains from kissing her son, he is embarrassed by public displays of affection. Instead she smiles and wishes them both a good day. As she pulls away her mind goes back to Catholic School, she had a teacher Mr. Connolly, he had dark hair with dramatic piercing eyes. She liked the look of his sculpted body and imagined he possessed the attributes of the men in Becky's magazine. At night she would think about him when she was alone in her room. As she would touch herself she would feel this delightful tingling in the soles of her feet. She would stop herself because she was a good girl and good girls didn't do such things. She pulls into her driveway with her hunger radiating from the center of her. Running up the stairs she goes to her bedroom and searches for her school uniform. She finds it neatly stored away in a bottom drawer, tartan skirt, white blouse bobby socks and a pair of burgundy loafers with two tarnished pennies. She undresses including her bra and panties. She proceeds to put on the blouse, the stiff fabric rubs against her nipples sending a wave of pleasure through her body. She wraps the tartan skirt around her waist and enjoys the feel of the wool skirt as it caresses her naked bottom. She then puts on her bobby socks and penny loafers. As she looks in the mirror she knows her hunger will be satisfied, I guess in the end she turned out to be a "Bad Penny!"

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Date: 12/28/2017 7:24:00 PM
Richard! This piece is fantastic so many people live unfulfilled lives bound by society's expectation.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/28/2017 8:37:00 PM
Thanks Sean, I appreciate you taking the time to read this longer piece.
Date: 7/4/2016 8:44:00 AM
Congrats Richard, for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 7/2/2016 11:51:00 PM
Richard, Congratulations on your Desperate House Wife WIN. I thank you for writing for my contest. Stop by my latest blog "UNION OF DISGUISING FACES "HZ1" blog #2." if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/3/2016 8:00:00 AM
Thanks for adding this one to your list.
Date: 9/11/2015 4:55:00 PM
BAR TOWEL !!!...I emphatically know that my face is beet red; I can feel the heat Rich! This truly was the sizzler, and I certainly know now how far Poetry Soup extends it's allow. Myself though could never detail the such. Although, now that I read this indepth prose of yours, I may contemplate the such, yet, I don't know if I could express as well. Or for that matte;r fit in a shape...lol....hmmm...breasts..the thought! Great prose Rich, I truly enjoyed the shock!....mi
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/11/2015 5:44:00 PM
I didn't know if the would censor it but it appears to have survived scrutiny. Did you find my danced poem? pushing fingers is another one.
Date: 7/11/2015 8:36:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Richard! Love, Kim
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/11/2015 9:27:00 PM
Thanks Kim.
Date: 7/7/2015 3:05:00 PM
Richard, A lovely win, Love **SKAT**
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/11/2015 9:28:00 PM
Thanks SKAT.
Date: 7/7/2015 2:15:00 PM
Hi Richard, Congrats on your win. Always ~LINDA~
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/11/2015 9:28:00 PM
Thanks Linda.
Date: 7/7/2015 4:04:00 AM
Tremendous write Richard! Congrats on urr win!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/7/2015 8:44:00 AM
Thanks Upma.
Date: 4/3/2015 3:46:00 AM
Nicely done Richard, Though I didn't like the last line :) " why" did she have to be a bad penny . I was raised catholic. Happy Easter !
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/3/2015 7:50:00 AM
It was a societal play on words, not a personal belief. Thanks for this great comment Debbie.
Date: 2/28/2015 6:31:00 PM
wowowowow, Richard. So glad I came to see your writing today and chose THIS one. you are at top form here. it is so cool to see a guy writing from a woman's perspective and doing it so well. it shows that you listen to the women in your life and understand them. If the contest includes narration, this is a top winner!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/1/2015 9:21:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, I had fun writing this one.
Date: 2/26/2015 11:38:00 AM
Richard would have said: OH LA LA!! so do I:) I suggest you send Eileen a sm; a co-write on such theme is what we now expect! // paul
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/26/2015 8:04:00 PM
Thanks my friend.
Date: 2/24/2015 2:25:00 PM
I enjoyed this write so much and at same time laughed so much. Wow I couldn't stop myself from wanting more from line to line. And trust me Richard, many can relate to this story. Def a 7 and wish you the best in the contest.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/26/2015 8:05:00 PM
Fantastic response Nejeri. I am pleased I entertained you. Also thanks for the 7!
Date: 2/23/2015 10:12:00 PM
This is the bombshell Richard... GL in the contest! Verlena
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/26/2015 8:06:00 PM
Thanks Verlena.
Date: 2/23/2015 4:33:00 PM
Oh my...50 shades of Lamoureux
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/23/2015 5:16:00 PM
Ha ha, cute!
Date: 2/23/2015 3:07:00 PM
And now to be serious, this is absolutely a great great short story, stimulating, and real life as I am sure we all see ourselves in there in some way! Fantastic write!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/23/2015 5:16:00 PM
Thanks Moen!
Date: 2/23/2015 3:06:00 PM
In case any Ladies wish to know my full name its Arthur MOEN Vaso
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/23/2015 5:18:00 PM
You should coin the Moen Moan!
Date: 2/23/2015 3:05:00 PM
A7, Took me a while to read all of this, having had to do it 3 minutes at a time!
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Brian Baumgarn
Date: 3/26/2015 4:34:00 AM
Oh my goodness.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/23/2015 5:19:00 PM
You Kill Me Arthur!
Date: 2/23/2015 2:28:00 PM
No question you can keep the readers interest stimulated from the first to last word, dear Richard!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/23/2015 5:24:00 PM
Thanks Demetrious I did my best to be as tasteful as possible with the genre.
Date: 2/23/2015 8:47:00 AM
Richard, I was riveted to every word, omg Richard you should write a book or something, just wonderful, you tapped into reality with this prose, how many women are locked in such a situation, lots is my guess, best of luck with this fabulous write and thanks so much for visiting my poetry ~~
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/23/2015 8:38:00 PM
If you are interested my book came out last year. It is called DUMMY, Hurtful and Healing Words. The e-book version is only $7.00 not bad for over 300 pages. The printed version is $20.00. It is now Printed in second edition as of May last year.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/23/2015 8:53:00 AM
What a great comment, thanks!
Date: 2/23/2015 8:40:00 AM
Richard, if this doesn't win very high I will be surprised. Good luck in the contest sir. Blessings
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/23/2015 8:54:00 AM
Thanks Eve, I hope you are right.
Date: 2/23/2015 8:22:00 AM
Ohh man! Maybe I shouldn't have read this on my way out the door to work, lol, you will be on my brain all day! :) Great story my friend :) xx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/23/2015 8:52:00 AM
Thanks Casarah, I'm pleased by your comment.
Date: 2/22/2015 5:10:00 PM
I do believe Steven needs to know what his wife really desires.Even good girls,and good wives have their'bad wild naughty side'..and have fantasies to fulfill.Richard an outstanding poem which fits the theme of the contest so well.Sometimes what might seem perfect to others ,is not perfect at all..Excellent!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/22/2015 5:28:00 PM
Thanks Charmaine, this fellow is missing out!
Date: 2/22/2015 4:27:00 PM
really most interesting pen richard enjoyable read as always pal an excellent piece of writing wishing you a blessed beautiful sunday
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/22/2015 5:27:00 PM
Thanks Liam, I'm plesed you enjoyed it.
Date: 2/22/2015 3:45:00 PM
I was thinking of Billy Joel's song, Only the Good Die Young -- "Catholic girls start much too late" My wife went to a Lutheran School -- I am going to look in her closet . . . I might be missing something . . . ?? Well done Richard . . . 7, you rock of course.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/22/2015 4:11:00 PM
Thanks David, this was a fun one to write.
Date: 2/22/2015 10:48:00 AM
WOW Richard I am in awe of your creativity in this brilliantly penned tastefully done erotic write - if this doesn't get top place it will be a travesty - BRAVO! Hugs Jan xxx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/22/2015 12:11:00 PM
I hope you are right! Thanks Jan.
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