Desolation

He builds a mighty garrison
Formed up from Duplo blocks
He brags you’ll never take his king
A regular Fort Knox

But then the ogre from the east
Comes crashing through the vale
There’s nothing left but ruins now
And odors that assail

A wet and slimy residue
There’s drool upon the walls
The mayhem, utter and complete
So off the toddler crawls
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Wolf Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 8:24 PM
Another mess to clean up at the Circle Ranch ~ Caballero Wolf
Krutsinger Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 4:32 PM
That last line made my day!
Bauer Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 2:45 PM
this is adorable, jeff!
Kyser Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 2:50 PM
Thanks, Ilene, it's fun to watch the grandkids play!
Hankins Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 10:23 AM
This is so cool, Jeff. So descriptive of a scene we've all witnessed from time to time with children playing. Very nicely done.
Kyser Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 10:46 AM
Our sunroom is blitzed, but it was a fun morning, thanks!
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