Desiring a Rainy Day

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The rain pours through the roof and drips Droplets land upon saddened cheeks If only pain within wouldn't grip Rain coat from her closet she seeks Brand new colorful umbrella open Standing on her porch give gray a peek Slowly meander forward broken Into the gray, except for umbrella's shades Red, blue, green, gold reasons chosen Shades on shades from umbrella cascades Flows with the raindrops lands at her feet Sadness flows out, raindrops downgrades Colorful umbrella coats the street All the color drips in puddles deep Laughter escapes life is sweet

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Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 9/12/2018 7:56:00 PM

Wonderful truth in how difficult it can seem to go out in the rain, but once there, wonderland!

Anisha Dutta

Date: 9/10/2018 12:48:00 PM

Smooth flow of poem like raindrops 'Droplets land upon saddened cheeks.' I am moved.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/10/2018 4:13:00 PM

Anisha, Thanks for your kind review of my work. I appreciate you dropping by and taking time to comment. Glad that the work moved you. Sara

M. L. Kiser

Date: 9/9/2018 2:29:00 PM

Love those dripping, flowing, rolling down the street, puddles of color! Beautiful.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/9/2018 2:51:00 PM

M.L., Thanks for the glee filled review. I appreciate you dropping by. Sara