Deserving

“I deserve to be happy”
they said, jaws set
determination
eyes glazed
Selfish Ones seeing only
what they wanted to see
tunnel-vision of mind's eye
narrowed down to one word
“Happy”
while others' protests
were utterly unheard

Thinking they could
by sheer determination
set themselves free
from the rest
of society
suspending
laws of nature
like drops of water
falling into a lake
yet failing to make
a ripple on the surface
or rings extending outward
...that their actions
would cause no reactions
outside of themselves

But repercussions
and consequences
shown on faces
in painful winces
worry-lines and tears
from failed investments
of time spent, years
broken beings
bearing witness
to quiet devastation
their lives crowded out
displaced and crushed
by the Selfish Ones'
overwhelming
entitlement
their right
their claim
on the happiness
they so “deserved”

And now the others
also suffer from a sort of
tunnel-vision, mind's eye narrowed
down to the other word
“Deserve”
for what could they possibly
have done to deserve this?
When all they wanted
was a little fragment
a slight share
of happiness in life
with someone 
who cared?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 11/10/2018 3:57:00 PM
Some people are 'happy' only if they complain or tear down someone else - I tend to pity them (while keeping a wide distance!)
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 11/10/2018 5:14:00 PM
A wise reaction, my friend! ;)
Date: 11/7/2018 3:42:00 PM
wow, I love how you did this one. the "entitled" ones just make me sick. I have one in my own family (in law) and I want to wring her neck!!! (because the rest of us are miserable thanks to this one person)
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 11/7/2018 3:56:00 PM
Thank you! Yes, I'm sure most of us have at least one in the family (I definitely do)... I am sick to death of the phrase "I deserve to be happy", as it is usually spoken by someone trampling on everyone else's happiness!
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