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Deserted

Cheeks red from tears and an empty heart. Left alone to suffocate and freeze in a dark vacuum of loneliness. Walking alone, fingers numb from the feeling of desertion. Freezing my reality and icing the cold streets of life. The body slowed by the chill of despair and collapsing on the roads of society, frosting over the state of mind and left in the dark to sleep.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/6/2016 12:37:00 AM
DAVID COLMAN, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. ** SKAT
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Date: 4/24/2016 9:59:00 AM
David Colman, nicely penned. Glad to read your poem today. Luv *LINDA*
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Date: 7/6/2011 3:19:00 PM
Very creative and lovely expressions on deserted, David
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Date: 7/5/2011 4:04:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you David. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 7/5/2011 2:02:00 AM
heartfelt write david...so fantastic and full of emotions....so wonderful...impressed...^-^junjun
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