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Desert Sands

Tepid sculpting winds, Rogue waves of blown sands tally, Infinite loose grains.

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James Fraser

Date: 6/6/2009 12:58:00 PM

Great Haiku Raul>James

Patricia Langston-Moran

Date: 6/6/2009 11:57:00 AM

Raul. I am computer illiterate and don't know how to activate my soup mail..didn't even know I had it. So. I went into my profile and hit the button that said "do you want to receive soup mail" so I think I can receive it now. Trouble is..I don't know how to SEND a soup mail. If you send me one, perhaps I will discover how to answer. Thanks for your comments...Patricia

Sue Mason

Date: 6/6/2009 9:17:00 AM

Another choice of words I'll have to ponder: "tepid" ... hmmm ... smile ... I really like your writing and right now I'm picturing the dunes on the Oregon coast ... smile ... thanks for the write AND the picture, Raul !!

Brian Strand

Date: 6/6/2009 7:10:00 AM

Beautiful pictures in the mind Raul.Land art indeed.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.

Date: 6/5/2009 2:23:00 PM

I like the rhythm the hard sounding consonants produce. Descriptive and creative lines captured my attention. Nice job! Karen

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 6/5/2009 1:13:00 PM

Lovely, Raul. I used top live inthe Chijuajua desert. (El Paso, Texas) Your description is perfect and extracts the same awsome feeling that one experiences when looking into the deep distant nothingness... except desert land. Great writting, friend. Lovingly, Dane

Michael Torres

Date: 6/5/2009 7:56:00 AM

Raul this is well thought. I looked at all your poems havent read them yet but wow have you been busy. Looking forward to reading them. GBU Michael

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/5/2009 6:31:00 AM

You painted the desert scene....can almost feel the sting of the sand in my eyes....love, Carrie

Christopher Higgins

Date: 6/5/2009 6:08:00 AM

This is marvelous...usually with haikus one line will stand out more than the others...this piece all the lines are strong...good work.