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Desert Sands

Tepid sculpting winds,
Rogue waves of blown sands tally,
Infinite loose grains.

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James Fraser

June 6, 2009 at 12:58 PM

Great Haiku Raul>James

Patricia Langston-Moran

June 6, 2009 at 11:57 AM

Raul. I am computer illiterate and don't know how to activate my soup mail..didn't even know I had it. So. I went into my profile and hit the button that said "do you want to receive soup mail" so I think I can receive it now. Trouble is..I don't know how to SEND a soup mail. If you send me one, perhaps I will discover how to answer. Thanks for your comments...Patricia

Sue Mason

June 6, 2009 at 9:17 AM

Another choice of words I'll have to ponder: "tepid" ... hmmm ... smile ... I really like your writing and right now I'm picturing the dunes on the Oregon coast ... smile ... thanks for the write AND the picture, Raul !!

Brian Strand

June 6, 2009 at 7:10 AM

Beautiful pictures in the mind Raul.Land art indeed.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.

June 5, 2009 at 2:23 PM

I like the rhythm the hard sounding consonants produce. Descriptive and creative lines captured my attention. Nice job! Karen

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

June 5, 2009 at 1:13 PM

Lovely, Raul. I used top live inthe Chijuajua desert. (El Paso, Texas) Your description is perfect and extracts the same awsome feeling that one experiences when looking into the deep distant nothingness... except desert land. Great writting, friend. Lovingly, Dane