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oh … how I’ve dreamed of you - sultry mistress to the sun's ire … dappled and coy amid the palms, a-sway your eyes of the gloaming’s vault shimmering with the Milky Way … Luna, red as rouge to blush your cheek of sacred sand - dune drifts, the waves of your golden tresses … you … a flawless gem, shimmering cut and polished with care and perfection to sunder the sunlight into rainbows - to focus the best energies and acumen of humankind and seed an oasis orchid with a bloom, exquisite and rare … oh proud are you jumeirah, jadhab and mutheer ... soon and sure we shall woo each other - you, Princess of the Arabian Desert me, fool for your fevered wiles tempted from afar … you, immodest and lush with such lavish loins of excess arms of extravagance, beckoning me decadent, seductive … warm, endless summer night whispering fancies … take good care, my heart the soft echos of its dire drumming have yet returned from the firmament final pulses not abounding ... but the rhythm it hereafter composes is graciously sacrificed for your admiration … offered up to your dream - sweet song of your gilded breeze … the aria of my tawny, torrid temptress ... DUBAI. ~ For His Highness Sheikh Mohammed bin Rashid Al Maktoum and the people of Dubai ~ Copyright © Gregory Richard Barden, June 21, 2017 * this is a form I created called “Deductiva” *

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Date: 6/25/2024 11:45:00 AM
This is absolutely stunning! I do go often to dubai, and i love how you’ve mentioned jumeirah etc and how youv written in such a descriptive manner! This temptress a dream one that is so beautiful to the soul of the readers im sure! I especially also love the way youv written “ you … a flawless gem, shimmering cut and polished with care and perfection to sunder the sunlight into rainbows -” and ofcourse the luna lines! And use of colors there to paint imagery!Ethereal! And captivating!impeccable
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/25/2024 6:39:00 PM
This is such a wonderful comment, IE, and it means a great deal to me - thank you so very kindly for taking the time. Blessings! <3

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