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Desert

On this peaceful solitude I stand
A barren golden area trampled by me
Miles and miles and miles I’ve walked
Empty-handed, broken-hearted, mind-numbed 
Relentless destiny, you’ve fooled me
I’ve found nothing to fill my hands’ void
Hearts are hobos and souls are minxes
Both have abandoned me in the darkest corner
Thorn me in my chest, you enemy of mine                                         
Sweet me not if a vow of silence I shall take    
Fur me at night finger tipped by your presence                                    
Foretell to me like Cassandra would                   
Remind me not what my ears won’t hear                                                   
Minds are jesters and tongues are vipers
Both have taken me under their wings
Like a swallow during its night flight would
Hopeful hope rain down on me
As teardrops of a widow’s mourning
Running across her cheeks
Armful arms, sun on me
As diamonds hanging off a chandelier
Illuminating a ballroom floor
Alas, I wander and wander through Realworld
I’m still searching for what I don’t have
I know one day I’ll reach the moody skies
And kiss the ground of Dreamworld,
Oh silver-lining dream of mine, ever be.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/22/2024 12:40:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 11/29/2018 1:03:00 AM
Wonderful lines. Love it. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 2/15/2016 12:26:00 PM
EDWIN, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 11/15/2015 11:59:00 PM
Edwin, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
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Date: 2/3/2015 2:37:00 PM
A wonderful poem.Kindly share the next.
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Date: 5/16/2014 11:04:00 AM
Thank you for sharing :)
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Date: 3/26/2009 11:12:00 AM
Wow, what a warm response! Didn't see it coming. I didn't think you were gonna like my poem so much. Thank you very much for all of your comments. It's really stimulating. :) :) Cheers!!
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Date: 3/26/2009 8:33:00 AM
Hi, Edwin ... Minds are jesters and tongues are vipers - is terrificly good. I love it. May you be ever welcome here, God bless you.
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Date: 3/25/2009 4:25:00 PM
This is a very sad, but well written poem, Edwin. I'm glad there is hope in the last three lines!
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Date: 3/25/2009 4:22:00 PM
well penned ,i love it-charma
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Date: 3/25/2009 3:18:00 PM
Awesome write, Edwin. Abandon looking for a dream...
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