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Deprived of Love

She looks at him and whispers, "I'm afraid of falling." He smiles at her and replies, "I'll catch you." A poem was brewing in my head like the tea bag in my cup drowning in roiling water Ribbons of steam spiraling up Two sweet verses had been written Two sugar cubes slowly melting sweltering in a cup a dash of cream to cool the tea My mind lingering on his words not sure of what I'd heard...ummm What was it that he'd said ~ "Whoever forges the key to your heart will be a lucky man." Were those lines he'd written for a song or had he composed a melody for me Was I wrong to lock my heart away and was he the one who'd forge the key Had I been denying myself the chance that love would nourish my craving I was imprisoned by shattered dreams a scheme devised to keep me safe but long deprived of love, I was starving My tea was cold, but I was told...ummm What was it that he'd said ~ "Don't be afraid of love happening." It was a fear I'd come to dread but when this man held out his hand I peered fathoms deep into his soul and gave in to my heart's demand We feasted through the night Hunger sated for I'd been fed the sweetest morsels after fasting What was it that he'd said ~ "No key did I forge to unlock your heart. It knew you belonged with me." It is not tea that fills my cup I drink from the look in his eyes I opened my heart and now I thrive Alive as a candle flame, burning bright Shattered dreams were swept away when in my ear I heard him say ~ What was it that he'd said ~ "I love you, darlin'. Come to bed."

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Date: 1/8/2020 8:41:00 PM
Lin, I am loving your romantic poems, this one is both sweet and captivating! :)
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/9/2020 5:23:00 AM
Oh, so many thanks for your encouraging comments. Thank you, Tania.
Date: 1/8/2020 1:11:00 PM
A very sweet story in more ways than one, and I like the ending.
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/8/2020 1:58:00 PM
Thank you for the visit and for sharing your thoughts with me, Michael.
Date: 1/8/2020 12:11:00 PM
Had to smile at your answer to Jan, many a time I've woken at an ungodly hour with something in my head and had to jot it down quickly before it faded. You are an expert with a romanctic pen Lin. Tom
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/8/2020 1:58:00 PM
Isn't that the pits...to wake with poetic thoughts in your head? Worse yet is to be too lazy to get up and write them down, so in the morning you're annoyed with yourself. Oh woe to the poet with such a bane. lol Thanks so much, Tom.
Date: 1/8/2020 10:09:00 AM
Wow Lin, this was wonderfully enticing, kept me glued to the screen hoping for a happy ending and it seems I found one. I really liked the form and the message that is woven in these words. Beautifully done my friend.
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/8/2020 11:44:00 AM
Happy to have provided a happy ending. Many of mine don't often have such a rosy outcome. Thanks for the kind thoughts, Chris.
Date: 1/8/2020 9:17:00 AM
So beautiful, Lin! You kept me mesmerized as some writes are hard for me to read. I like the breaks in the poem with couplets. A lovely romantic write! A fave!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/8/2020 9:41:00 AM
I know how that goes, Lin! So nicely done!
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/8/2020 9:21:00 AM
Hi Kim, and thank you for liking this one enough to mark it as a favorite. It's a bit different for me, but it took on a life of its own and I had no choice but to follow its lead.
Date: 1/8/2020 8:53:00 AM
wow Lin you really are on a high with the romantic poems - write on!!!:-) hugs jan xx
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/8/2020 8:59:00 AM
Thanks, Jan. I was inspired by a conversation yesterday, and woke at 2:30 this morning with lines brewing in my head, thus the brewing tea. It escalated from there...one of those moments when the need for pen and paper demands that we write.

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