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Depression - ACROSTIC

Depression Acrostic Depression, it’s not just in your head, Enslaving your soul, “I’d be better off dead.” Poisoning your attitude Retarding your mood. Eternal slumber, Solitude replaces laughter, Sailing out into the sea of tears, In my head, I scream, but no one cares, On and on I scream, no one hears, Not a soul, my pleas fall on deaf ears. Composed by: S. Ronthorpe

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/1/2015 9:06:00 AM
A vry close view of depression with superb rhyme scheme.
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Date: 7/19/2014 4:31:00 PM
LOVED IT ...!
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Date: 2/6/2012 5:28:00 PM
well, I had seen this one before, but rereading it, I still LOVE it. You did very well with defining this disease.
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Date: 1/26/2012 9:42:00 AM
This is a very descriptive acrostic which is aesthetically pleasing the way you have it displayed.
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Date: 5/15/2011 9:51:00 AM
Thoughtful write on Depression in an acrostic layout, Samual
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Date: 5/15/2011 1:39:00 AM
Samuel, it is hard to understand. I am married to someone with depression AND anxiety, not to mention a multitude of other health issues like diabetes, asthma, etc. I really feel for him and try my best to support him. I hope you find support and that you are on meds too. Those seem to help somewhat! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 5/14/2011 11:11:00 PM
S.R., very deep,,, depression is a disease that once took a bad tool on me a couple of times,,, thanks for sharing...p.d.
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