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Departure Angst

Their plea departure angst “oh, flee.” Hearts pray tied by God’s love “let’s stay.” Sweet vow* reigns steadfast, yet “bye … now.”
*Psalm 76:11 Vow, and pay unto the LORD your God. April 6, 2021 1st place, "Finding Your Musette 2" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Joseph May; judged on 4/24/2021.

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Date: 4/25/2021 3:36:00 PM
Congratulations, Beata!
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Date: 4/25/2021 1:55:00 PM
Nicely done, Beata! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 4/25/2021 12:28:00 PM
Hi Beata, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a great day;-) Alexis
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Date: 4/24/2021 3:32:00 PM
These are a challenge to write because of the brevity. You were able to tell an entire story with just these few words. Bravo! Congratulations on your win. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 4/24/2021 8:46:00 AM
Goodbyes are often sad, Congrats on your win Beata
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Date: 4/6/2021 2:26:00 AM
pray by heart make alive the dead soul!
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