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Departure

When I pass into the great unknown Through the gateway of death May I know that my shadow has touched the earth With the warmth of the sun to my back And now rises with the simple joy of knowing love Will reside in the hearts of those I leave behind October 14, 2022 Bite Size Poem Line Gauthier, Sponsor

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Date: 11/11/2022 11:07:00 AM
Very beautiful! Congratulations!
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 11/13/2022 6:21:00 PM
Thank you so much Ann.
Date: 10/25/2022 4:06:00 PM
Beautiful...
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 10/25/2022 6:14:00 PM
I thank you so much Craig Cornish! Hugs and Health! Lonna
Date: 10/21/2022 11:54:00 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this reality in your awesome poetic style. God bless you.
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 10/22/2022 9:16:00 AM
Thank you very much Beata! Hugs Lonna
Date: 10/21/2022 3:33:00 PM
Lovely brevity ~
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 10/22/2022 9:17:00 AM
I than you most kindly dear Line! Lonna
Date: 10/21/2022 7:02:00 AM
This too is immortality. Living in the hearts of others. Beautifully written. Congratualtions!
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 10/22/2022 9:17:00 AM
Thank you for your very nice comment! Lonna
Date: 10/21/2022 3:04:00 AM
Beautiful. Our love is the sun on the back of those we leave behind.
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Date: 10/22/2022 9:18:00 AM
What a beautiful comment! Lonna
Date: 10/21/2022 12:33:00 AM
A stand alone winner! Congratulations, Lonna, beautifully penned
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 10/22/2022 9:19:00 AM
Thank you for thinking that. So happy you liked it. Lonna

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