Dentist Donkey

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For Picture Prompt Limerick Contest. Cartoonish drawing/picture of a Tiger and Donkey facing eachother over a small creek. The Tiger has his mouth open wide and the Donkey looks satirical.

Came Tiger with sore, rotten teeth To Doc Donkey to get some relief “Smells like you've had treats, Just what did you eat?” Numbed Tiger said, “Ath, juth a pieth”

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Jim Healey

Date: 7/15/2024 7:42:00 AM

Crystol, this is really funny! And it's a very interesting take on the picture prompt. (I've written one for that contest as well, but I think it takes a more conventional approach.) Well done. Cheers from Canada, Jim

Crystol Woods
Date: 7/15/2024 3:02:00 PM

Heeeeheee, thank you!! Imma check out your take on it too! Good luck to you! Xo

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/9/2024 5:57:00 PM

Love that last line, Crythtal! ~ Gerthon

Crystol Woods
Date: 7/10/2024 1:14:00 AM

Thank you! :) I think I'm hysterical but my hubby just gives me a look... which makes me laugh harder! Hahaha! A merry heart doeth good like a medicine!