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For Picture Prompt Limerick Contest. Cartoonish drawing/picture of a Tiger and Donkey facing eachother over a small creek. The Tiger has his mouth open wide and the Donkey looks satirical.

Dentist Donkey


Came Tiger with sore, rotten teeth To Doc Donkey to get some relief “Smells like you've had treats, Just what did you eat?” Numbed Tiger said, “Ath, juth a pieth”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Healey Avatar
July 15, 2024 at 7:42 AM
Crystol, this is really funny! And it's a very interesting take on the picture prompt. (I've written one for that contest as well, but I think it takes a more conventional approach.) Well done. Cheers from Canada, Jim
Woods Avatar
July 15, 2024 at 3:02 PM
Heeeeheee, thank you!! Imma check out your take on it too! Good luck to you! Xo
Wolf Avatar
July 9, 2024 at 5:57 PM
Love that last line, Crythtal! ~ Gerthon
Woods Avatar
July 10, 2024 at 1:14 AM
Thank you! :) I think I'm hysterical but my hubby just gives me a look... which makes me laugh harder! Hahaha! A merry heart doeth good like a medicine!
Kauffman Avatar
July 8, 2024 at 4:49 PM
Very, very cute, Crystol! SouMail!
Woods Avatar
July 9, 2024 at 1:14 AM
Thank you!! Xo
Dietrich Avatar
July 6, 2024 at 6:42 PM
Haha. That is really good
Woods Avatar
July 8, 2024 at 7:55 AM
Thanks Andrea<3xo
Parker Avatar
July 6, 2024 at 7:40 AM
Cute!
Woods Avatar
July 6, 2024 at 10:49 AM
Lol...ty! I'm one of those people who laugh at their own jokes! (Well if I didn't, who would!?) :) xo
Bowring Avatar
July 6, 2024 at 12:11 AM
Such a clever, funny limerick dear Crystol. That last line is so amusing! Good luck in the contest. I loved it :):)
Woods Avatar
July 6, 2024 at 12:27 AM
Thank you so much! I love thee humor in Limerick and I love to laugh. Xo
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July 5, 2024 at 7:32 PM
Brilliant Crystol. All the best… Beryl
Woods Avatar
July 6, 2024 at 12:29 AM
Hey Beryl tysm for stopping by! Xo
Crandall Avatar
July 5, 2024 at 5:36 PM
Haha, I'm laughing as i listen to line 5 in my minds ear!
Woods Avatar
July 6, 2024 at 12:27 AM
Hehe! I'm so glad! Laughing is great medicine! Tysm for saying so! Xo
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